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Broken tears

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Broken tears

 The whisper of the fractured wind
      Intensify  painful sighs
 That echo in the falling rain
       to inter broken tears
  Which lay beneath the fallen leaves
          disguised as winsome smiles
Then  turn to ghastly frowns in winter's wrath
               in snowflakes epitaph  

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  1. Date: 12/8/2013 7:09:00 PM

    Joseph,, , Congratulations on 'Your own favorite poem contest." I truly miss reading and scanning poems from the winning contest list. Hope you are well! Always & Forever * Linda

    May Avatar Joseph May Date: 12/8/2013 9:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Linda....hugs
    May Avatar Joseph May Date: 12/8/2013 9:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

  1. Date: 12/3/2013 6:29:00 PM

    congrats on your fine win.

  1. Date: 12/2/2013 11:05:00 AM

    a very good metaphors, enjoyed it. congrats on the win

  1. Date: 12/2/2013 8:23:00 AM

    Congrats on the win, Joseph

  1. Date: 12/2/2013 6:04:00 AM

    - Congratulations on your winning poem in the contest: - A favorite poem of yours! -by Giorgio V. - A clear favorite poem! - Well done, Joseph !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/19/2013 3:50:00 PM

    Joseph, I finally have come here to see what you must have entered entered in my contest. It is a fine poem. But Do you realize it was never entered into my contest ? maybe you forgot? I just wanted to let you know that in case you were curious or had forgotten to enter it. It's got some lovely symbolism!

  1. Date: 11/15/2013 6:00:00 AM

    Joseph !! This is awesome-- I love your use of metaphors-- emotion vs. nature. X

  1. Date: 11/11/2013 4:47:00 AM

    Brilliant!

    May Avatar Joseph May Date: 11/11/2013 10:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Bindu
  1. Date: 11/10/2013 5:26:00 PM

    i adore this poem, your images are so beautifully penned...wow....great write Joseph, i think Andrea will love this one :)

    May Avatar Joseph May Date: 11/10/2013 6:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Sandra
  1. Date: 11/10/2013 5:23:00 PM

    An artist at large, you write poetry with images forevermore, enjoyed your verse Joseph xxx

    May Avatar Joseph May Date: 11/10/2013 6:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Rose
  1. Date: 11/10/2013 4:54:00 PM

    Wow!! Joseph, this is incredible. You blew me away with this priceless poem. Great job. Hugs and love, Gail

    May Avatar Joseph May Date: 11/10/2013 6:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Gail
  1. Date: 11/10/2013 3:26:00 PM

    Ahh!! Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for your visit..Sara

    May Avatar Joseph May Date: 11/10/2013 4:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Sara
  1. Date: 11/10/2013 1:32:00 PM

    - Beautiful ... still a little sad ... well written Joseph! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    May Avatar Joseph May Date: 11/10/2013 4:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Anne
  1. Date: 11/10/2013 12:20:00 PM

    Nice imagery... Terry

    May Avatar Joseph May Date: 11/10/2013 1:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Terry....
  1. Date: 11/10/2013 12:11:00 PM

    That was a beautiful twist of nature Joseph.

    May Avatar Joseph May Date: 11/10/2013 1:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you FJ