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by Gary Player

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  1. Date: 11/10/2013 4:52:00 PM
    Very well written Brian. He is a sorcerer of evil not a magician. Last stanza is powerful .well done .Anne

    Bronson Avatar Brian Bronson
    Date: 1/9/2014 12:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Much appreciated, Anne!
  1. Date: 11/10/2013 10:47:00 AM
    Brian I enjoyed how you put this together. If you would though, please explain the last verse to me.

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 11/10/2013 11:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Ahhh....very clever indeed. Well done!...and thank you for the explanation.
    Bronson Avatar Brian Bronson
    Date: 11/10/2013 11:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    In this poem, the mechanisms of existence have been altered to allow evil people to escape karmic retribution. For this reason, the Dark Lord escapes judgment and punishment for his evil acts.