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Hear Me

Hear me.
Please listen.
My little squeaks mean something.
Help me.
I can’t.
This pain is molesting my spirit.
Is it
worth it?
Should I leave everything behind and just “poof” away?
Please try to
Help me.
My physical appearance is starting to fatigue.
Save me.

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  1. Date: 4/22/2014 9:35:00 AM
    Hello Christian, I found your poem,while searching for a read. This jumped off the page! ABSOLUTELY Beautiful... Thanks so much for sharing. Peace, Deborah

  1. Date: 4/20/2014 4:08:00 PM
    I feel a sense that you're feeling ignored. Been there...done that... :( Unfortunately, we have to live through those wretched moments. these two lines remind me of me at times: "This pain is molesting my spirit. Is it worth it?" Fascinating write. Keep it up! ~ DWB

  1. Date: 11/11/2013 7:53:00 AM
    Panicky sentiments. It's nice to read from someone new. This is a frightening poem.I feel as if I am losing someone close to me. Great write. I hope to read morefrom you! Always, Laura

  1. Date: 11/8/2013 10:12:00 PM
    Your poetic muse is at its highest with nice rhythm, Christian