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Hear Me

Hear me.
Please listen.
My little squeaks mean something.
Help me.
I can’t.
This pain is molesting my spirit.
Is it
worth it?
Should I leave everything behind and just “poof” away?
Please try to
Help me.
My physical appearance is starting to fatigue.
Save me.

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  1. Date: 11/11/2013 7:53:00 AM

    Panicky sentiments. It's nice to read from someone new. This is a frightening poem.I feel as if I am losing someone close to me. Great write. I hope to read morefrom you! Always, Laura

  1. Date: 11/8/2013 10:12:00 PM

    Your poetic muse is at its highest with nice rhythm, Christian