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Dang

Dang that girl looks so good
She is in my opinion
That hottest looking woman in my neighborhood
I want to ask her out

But dang I cannot sum up enough courage
To just go up and talk to her
She does not even know I am alive
That much is for sure

Dang I wish she was my girlfriend
I would like to take her to see a movie
Or out to dinner one weekend
But it is not that simple

Dang I wish it was though
I wish that she and I
Could be an item
I would be the luckiest guy

Having a girl like her in my life
But dang it is all a lost cause
Dang I wish that I wish I was cooler
Without all my clumsiness and all my flaws

But it will probably never happen
And all I have to say is dang

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  1. Date: 11/9/2013 11:10:00 AM
    .... nice and fun to read your poem today, James ..... dang .... dang - Have a great weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)