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It's Winter

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It's Winter

Frozen lake-water, Damp eyelids,misty breath, Foggy-streets' dim lights, Silvery-green valleys, Leafless trees,concrete boughs.
written on: 7-11-2013

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  1. Date: 11/26/2013 7:34:00 AM

    Wonderful. love the mixture of nature and man made.

    Bantawa Avatar Kiran Bantawa Date: 11/26/2013 7:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks for the kind comment.
  1. Date: 11/12/2013 9:33:00 PM

    there is much to see in this poem KIran, winter can be beautiful. =)

    Bantawa Avatar Kiran Bantawa Date: 11/16/2013 7:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    yap Thomas.
  1. Date: 11/8/2013 7:46:00 AM

    Phantasmagoric painting of winter's mornings!

    Bantawa Avatar Kiran Bantawa Date: 11/8/2013 9:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you.
  1. Date: 11/7/2013 5:59:00 PM

    Even though this seemed short it was well thought out and well written thank you for sharing a beautiful thought of your imagination with me tonight. and thank you for your congrades fellow souper.

    Bantawa Avatar Kiran Bantawa Date: 11/8/2013 9:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you and you are welcome!
  1. Date: 11/7/2013 4:32:00 PM

    You quite depicted a winter scene . the concrete boughs was an awesome image.

    Bantawa Avatar Kiran Bantawa Date: 11/8/2013 9:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Love. hugs and thanks!
  1. Date: 11/7/2013 12:40:00 PM

    Lovely, just lovely! Thanks for stopping by to comment on my poetry today. Hugs and love, Gail

    Bantawa Avatar Kiran Bantawa Date: 11/16/2013 7:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks for liking GAd.
  1. Date: 11/7/2013 5:31:00 AM

    :) :)

    Bantawa Avatar Kiran Bantawa Date: 11/8/2013 9:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    :-):-)