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Winter Wind

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Winter Wind

colorful leaves
rush across the avenue
and into the pond
geese noisily wing southward
chased on by the winter wind


Written for Francine 11/06/2013

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  1. Date: 11/26/2013 5:42:00 AM

    To my knowledge, this is the first "tanka" poem I have read and I find it quite interesting. It's very simple, yet eloquent. You captured a moment in time quite beautifully; kudos, my friend :)

  1. Date: 11/13/2013 6:11:00 PM

    very beautiful tanka....i could see this scene unfolding :)

  1. Date: 11/11/2013 9:08:00 PM

    A lovely winter tanka, Craig! Thanks for all your kind comments lately. You are such a gentleman! Sorry I have not been around much to respond. Hopefully some of my troubles will pass soon. Love and Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 11/11/2013 4:19:00 PM

    I really really like yours, Craig!! Also I have noticed fall seems to be more popular for this challenge than winter tanka!

  1. Date: 11/8/2013 11:41:00 AM

    All of a sudden I feel a bit chilly, perhaps I should follow the bird's example and head south.

  1. Date: 11/7/2013 12:12:00 AM

    psst, you have 8 syllables in line 4