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Tug of War

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Tug of War

Driven mad by all this pulling-
Tearing me limb from limb!
Who do you think you are fooling?
Ah, this feeling- great and grim!

Grieving Goddess fits the bodice,
And embodies my Despair.
At this Tug of War- am no novice...
(Oh! All the Hurt I can't repair!)

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  1. Date: 2/12/2014 4:08:00 PM

    email

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet Date: 2/17/2014 11:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    :)
  1. Date: 11/13/2013 6:38:00 PM

    I know this tug of war, all to well. You are so great at expressing your feelings. Nice work, Chan! Love it! :)

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet Date: 11/15/2013 9:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, Kel! <3 :)
  1. Date: 11/10/2013 1:05:00 PM

    You definitely have a talent for expression; and I enjoyed your bio ;) If you haven't already, look over my I Spit Fire contest. I have a feeling you would have no problem with the poetry I request.

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas Date: 11/11/2013 9:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Awesome!
    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet Date: 11/11/2013 4:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, F.J. I did enter your contest ;)
  1. Date: 11/8/2013 7:14:00 PM

    Chan my friend This is a very emotional and sad poem, that pulled at my heart. That's not nice you bad boy. HEE HEE Thanks for the sweet comment on my Pieced Me Together poem. HEY !!! Do I need to tell your sweetie he doesn't complete you. LOL Hugs and Love Sweet Pea

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet Date: 11/9/2013 5:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks as always for stopping by and for the read and reply, Sweet Pea! <3
  1. Date: 11/6/2013 2:41:00 PM

    Tnks for stopping by my humble verses Chan..This is a profound poem indeed.Some hurt We can t indeed repair ..But for every rose there is a thorn..and for every rose there are petals everywhere.May you be blissed by their perdume.Only time will heal the pain.I love the way you are able to express your emotions.

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet Date: 11/9/2013 5:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, Charm; very much appreciated :)
  1. Date: 11/6/2013 9:41:00 AM

    Cleverly expressed.

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet Date: 11/6/2013 12:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, Richard :)
  1. Date: 11/5/2013 8:53:00 PM

    In the warmth of a new day, things become a little clearer. =)

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet Date: 11/5/2013 10:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    This came flooding out of me tonight. You, my friend, and many other friends, have helped me more than you'll ever know. Thanks, Tom :)