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As God As My Witness

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As God As My Witness

The Life Quixotic is still Chaotic, 
Still despotic while Tyrants rule. 
Joy, it seems, a thing of dreams
When I wander like a Fool. 
Eternally internally profoundly confused- 
Searching for Time far better spent 
In a Mind I find unfit- MISUSED! 
A wish to be Omnipotent...

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  1. Date: 12/2/2013 8:39:00 AM

    Congrats on the win, JTAP

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet Date: 12/2/2013 11:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, Doc! :)
  1. Date: 12/2/2013 5:57:00 AM

    - Congratulations on your winning poem in the contest: - A favorite poem of yours! -by Giorgio V. - A clear favorite poem! - Well done !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet Date: 12/2/2013 8:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks so much, Anne Lise! :)
  1. Date: 11/8/2013 7:21:00 PM

    Chan my dear friend This is a deep and emotional write. All your emotions are coming out in this write and the reader can feel your despair. thanks for another great comment on my Crazily Contagious poem. Hugs and love sweet pea

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet Date: 11/9/2013 5:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Glad you felt the emotions. Thanks for dropping by, Sweet Pea! <3
  1. Date: 11/6/2013 2:46:00 PM

    I can feel your pulse rate ..and the beating of a heart searching for joy..What you search for is what im searching for and others too.Never give up..Joy might touch your life when least expected..through the simplest of things .I am enjoying the prodound way you think with.

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet Date: 11/9/2013 5:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Than you for the kind and encouraging words, Charm, and for dropping by with a review :)
    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop Date: 11/6/2013 2:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    profound..Grr sorry for typo..its so difficult when im using phone : )
  1. Date: 11/5/2013 5:10:00 PM

    My mind is in a constant state of chaos. =P I enjoyed this one mate. =)

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet Date: 11/5/2013 5:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, Tom. I'm having a rough time right now so I am getting all these feelings out.