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Eternal Breath

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Eternal Breath

 There is a song in every heart
A melody in every soul
But once the breath of life departs
That song from us is stolen

As raindrops from the heavens flow
The willow weeps when tears are shed
A sad song in the wind doth blow
Once the breath of life has fled

 But one day we will have eternal breath
No more will we cry
And angels will  rejoice  on high
Cause death itself will die

Joseph May
                         

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  1. Date: 12/11/2013 8:23:00 AM

    Wonderful write my friend! You have a fantastic talent for words for sure.

  1. Date: 12/5/2013 6:23:00 PM

    hey, good to see this one made the list. Congrats to you!!

  1. Date: 11/30/2013 8:14:00 AM

    Lovely thoughts here. Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 11/28/2013 5:33:00 AM

    very nice Joseph congrats on win Shadow x smile hug

  1. Date: 11/27/2013 2:56:00 PM

    Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/27/2013 6:50:00 AM

    How true and well done in the competition. Robert

  1. Date: 11/27/2013 3:58:00 AM

    many congrats on your top spot Joseph well deserved xx

  1. Date: 11/26/2013 9:23:00 PM

    Congrats on your win, Joseph

  1. Date: 11/26/2013 7:41:00 PM

    Awesome job Joseph....congratulations... knockout last line!!!

  1. Date: 11/26/2013 5:19:00 PM

    Hi Joseph,, that is awesome how everyone got a first place... Now that's a fun loving way of saying. Back Off all you haters, it's my contest and I do and enjoy what I want. Love Gail, for that.... Every poem I read was beautiful so far.... ~Hugs & Congratulations with your "Eternal Breath" awesome win... Always ~ LINDA

    May Avatar Joseph May Date: 11/26/2013 7:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Linda....so true...hugs
  1. Date: 11/26/2013 2:37:00 PM

    - Eternal Breath Contest: Sponsored by: Gail Angel Doyle - A contest that was at least for me a deep theme. - CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WINNING POEM, VERY SKILLED WRITTEN!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    May Avatar Joseph May Date: 11/26/2013 7:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Anne
  1. Date: 11/6/2013 9:51:00 PM

    splendidly arresting my senses, joseph... ink on!..:) huggs

    May Avatar Joseph May Date: 11/7/2013 8:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Nette
  1. Date: 11/6/2013 3:30:00 PM

    You did a marvelous job with this theme, Joseph.

    May Avatar Joseph May Date: 11/6/2013 5:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Andrea
  1. Date: 11/6/2013 7:07:00 AM

    Every word seems to be taken from the wings of angels in flight, so beautiful Joseph, you are a wonder with the pen, inf fact so much I will take a line from your poem and use it as a title for a poem "There Is a song in every heart" With your permission? xxx

    May Avatar Joseph May Date: 11/6/2013 8:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for those kind words Rose....and YES ... I am honored that you would use a line from my poem...hugs
  1. Date: 11/5/2013 4:09:00 PM

    Great work that speaks of your faith..Reads like a winner for the contest..Thanks for the visit with congrats.Sara

    May Avatar Joseph May Date: 11/5/2013 4:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Sara
  1. Date: 11/5/2013 3:54:00 AM

    - Lovely poem, Joseph. - Luck in contest. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    May Avatar Joseph May Date: 11/5/2013 12:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Anne....