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Maiden In A Maze

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Maiden In A Maze

Adrift among tall reeds and grass wild vines the winds have spread, adorned perplexes, thus, a maiden's quest A maze of tangles stirs the glass She's lost, when night comes vexed with thorns to spark a tear, which stains her breast
_________________________________________________ By Carrie Richards for Nette's Contest "Senses for a Sestet" 11/4/13

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  1. Date: 11/11/2013 5:34:00 PM

    Beautiful sestet. Congrats on your win Carrie! :) G.

  1. Date: 11/11/2013 9:49:00 AM

    Drawn back to the era and the feel! Congrats Carrie!

  1. Date: 11/10/2013 11:01:00 PM

    Just wonderful. congrats. BG

  1. Date: 11/10/2013 6:10:00 PM

    beautifully penned Carrie...congrats on your awesome win :)

  1. Date: 11/10/2013 7:45:00 AM

    Awesome winning work..Congrats ..Sara

  1. Date: 11/9/2013 6:39:00 PM

    Hmm,Wonderful piece.Good visual....Congrats on your superb win...

  1. Date: 11/9/2013 6:05:00 PM

    Marvelous, very visual and brings out her perplexed feelings of being lost and sad. Congrats, Carrie.

  1. Date: 11/5/2013 10:14:00 AM

    Incredible & fierce. Such is the lost who suddenly "find" their way when they have fallen. This speaks loudly to me. Fantastic job. Oh, check your Soup Mail... =)

  1. Date: 11/5/2013 9:19:00 AM

    lovely imagery, I love the flow through this. Wonderful words Carrie =)

  1. Date: 11/4/2013 10:42:00 PM

    Wow, I love what you have seen within this image, you have painted a wonderful picture with your glorious words my friend! I could visualize exactly what was in the image by your awesome descriptions! I really enjoyed reading this delightful piece this evening! What a fabulous poem, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 11/4/2013 7:52:00 PM

    So many senses to take hold of here, well done Carrie, xxx