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The Throne of Bone and Stone

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The Throne of Bone and Stone

The throne I own while I reign alone 
is made of Sin and carved in stone! 
My seat is cold and feels like gold, 
but it's really made of teeth and bone...
Where is my Queen who rules my dreams, 
and makes the World as sad as it seems?
She haunts my sleep so quick and deep- 
Stabs my Mind with piercing screams!

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  1. Date: 11/5/2013 9:07:00 AM

    a strong poem Chan, I feel the deep coldness in this piece. =)

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet Date: 11/5/2013 9:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Much appreciated as always, my friend. Am getting ready to reply to your messages ;)
  1. Date: 11/5/2013 8:39:00 AM

    Very powerful imagery!

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet Date: 11/5/2013 9:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, Richard! :)
  1. Date: 11/5/2013 8:33:00 AM

    Your footwork with words leaves nothing to be desired. This is an excellent piece. King of Love who travails....I have rather conjured it in that way. So short and powerful! Friend, JM

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet Date: 11/5/2013 9:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, JM. It's always a pleasure when you drop by. Much appreciated, my friend :)
  1. Date: 11/4/2013 8:37:00 PM

    very intense, xxx

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet Date: 11/5/2013 8:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for stopping by, Rose :)
  1. Date: 11/4/2013 4:37:00 PM

    Nice write Archaic. I dearly loved those first two lines. thanks for the read...peter

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet Date: 11/4/2013 4:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for the review and comments, Peter :)