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Frozen Fragments

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Frozen Fragments

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                   as days get shorter
                   yuletide's chill fills the air
                   inside and outside
                   wearing all her absence
                   through frozen fragments of hours




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  1. Date: 3/30/2014 10:34:00 AM

    Very NICE write! Power punch

  1. Date: 3/21/2014 7:01:00 PM

    gorgeous Ruben you nailed it great pen hugs

  1. Date: 3/21/2014 5:37:00 AM

    Loved the whole tanka but the last two lines really floored me...

  1. Date: 3/13/2014 3:03:00 PM

    yeah, me too. Love it, Ruben. hugs, Catie :)

  1. Date: 3/2/2014 7:56:00 PM

    Aha! Here's one! This is tanka-rrific, Ruben. Aside from the seasonal personification, I can read this in other ways....which of course is a Ruben-esque quality. Interesting, this tanka has a high syllable count compared to many of your other tanka.

    Ryerson Avatar Tim Ryerson Date: 3/21/2014 5:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I tried to count them but I ran out of fingers...
    Lindsey Avatar Catie Lindsey Date: 3/13/2014 3:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    LOL :)
    O. Avatar Ruben O. Date: 3/3/2014 1:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for counting the syllables. : D
  1. Date: 2/26/2014 7:26:00 AM

    Beautiful poem...ending with such a great line! Will have to read more of your poetry :)

  1. Date: 2/22/2014 4:06:00 PM

    Still waiting for new stuff, Ruben. Like THIS one, which I consider a very strong tanka. And how funny you learned some new slang words today!

  1. Date: 1/6/2014 4:47:00 PM

    Dear Rueben, Excellent Tanka! Even though it doesn't get very cold in Florida, these short daylight hours are unwelcome. Thank you for stopping by and reading my poem. Been sad about losing my father five years ago today. I feel like he's still with me in spirit. Thank you for your friendship. It means a lot to me. Much love always, Carolyn

  1. Date: 1/4/2014 8:37:00 PM

    Well, well, my last blog was removed. I wonder which infraction I broke?

  1. Date: 1/3/2014 2:25:00 PM

    Darn that's good!! Can I have that last line?...hehe...no seriously...hand it over, Ruben......joking...;)

  1. Date: 1/2/2014 11:13:00 PM

    Hi ruben, sure do miss you, but it was great seeing you at my blog today. thanks for your support!

  1. Date: 1/2/2014 11:13:00 PM

    and happy new year to you too.

  1. Date: 1/1/2014 9:55:00 AM

    This is quite beautiful.

  1. Date: 12/30/2013 4:12:00 PM

    ahhh !! An excellent tanka !!! Well done !!

  1. Date: 12/30/2013 2:39:00 PM

    Ruben- I can't wait for spring!!!! I love the simplicity of this poem and I feel like turning up my heater. Think I will. Thank you so much for your welcome. I have found nothing but warmth and encouragement from everyone so far. I don't know how prolific I will be, because what used to "just come to me" is something I have to really work out now. I have been away from writing for far too long, but I'm here now! barb boyd

  1. Date: 12/25/2013 4:10:00 PM

    Thank you for your Well Wishes on my “Southern Christmas” blog. Having posted it so late I was not expecting any responses, so am overwhelmed. It has further buoyed my Festive Season. I hope that your holiday is treating you well, Scott. And as I have read below, I look forward to seeing more of your words.

  1. Date: 12/24/2013 3:37:00 PM

    Happy Holidays handsome ;) Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/23/2013 8:44:00 PM

    Merry Christmas, Ruben! Love and hugs, Catie :)

  1. Date: 12/19/2013 9:46:00 PM

    ARGH...http://www.haikupoemsandpoets.com/ read it and weep

  1. Date: 12/19/2013 1:01:00 PM

    Nicely expressed. Sure gives me the feel of winter. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 12/18/2013 4:40:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win Ruben I love how you changed the second line to Yuletide's chill..Maybe its time to give us readers another post : )

  1. Date: 12/18/2013 2:58:00 AM

    I'm am considering a Tanka, but I don't know if I could best that last line. Nicely done. Glad you're able to make some use of that Haiku Info.

  1. Date: 12/12/2013 4:55:00 PM

    This one is so full of emotion...congratulations on your win...

  1. Date: 12/12/2013 3:55:00 PM

    great figurative language in yours, Ruben. I was delightfully surprised to see you enter a poem in my contest. Big congrats for the winners' list.

  1. Date: 12/12/2013 9:13:00 AM

    Beautiful poem!

  1. Date: 12/12/2013 8:36:00 AM

    Congrats on your win. Awesome poem.

  1. Date: 12/11/2013 8:09:00 AM

    Man, this is gooooood. I barely know the form, don't know how it fits within those 'borders.' All I really know is how a poem STIRS me, and this one does. As far as the "resistance' OF COURSE. And your po's are all over that site! Did you check out "tanka" Your po's are featured.... which, don't get me wrong, I get. They rock. I heard through a friend our "maverick" was OUSTED? I'll be souping him, just to see... maybe a misunderstanding? If he's been booted for voicing concerns, I'm outahere

  1. Date: 12/8/2013 3:25:00 PM

    :-)... I really like this... ;)

  1. Date: 11/29/2013 10:43:00 AM

    This would be a winner in Andrea's contest.....awesome !!

  1. Date: 11/15/2013 3:02:00 PM

    Dude, what a waste that you don't write more---this fills the mind with awesome personification.

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