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Day Remembered

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Day Remembered

sunrise and sunset
every color is there
as autumn leaves twirl
dancing   -  each day remembered
leaves this season with such flare

©Donna Jones
11-3-2013

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  1. Date: 11/13/2013 12:02:00 PM

    Beautifully Rhymed...and Visually Stunning!

  1. Date: 11/9/2013 12:58:00 AM

    Nicely done, and I like how you used leaves in the last line. Though not the noun leaves, it reminded me of them.

  1. Date: 11/8/2013 9:03:00 AM

    ahhhh the beauty of the season when it's at it's peak! Soon it will be covered in white... yet we never forget the colorful days of autumn. Awesome poem!!

  1. Date: 11/7/2013 6:00:00 PM

    Very nicely written. Conjures up vivid images of a beautiful season.

  1. Date: 11/7/2013 5:25:00 PM

    thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 11/6/2013 9:56:00 AM

    donns! you thrill me, thrill me!.. delightful tanka..:) huggs

  1. Date: 11/6/2013 4:42:00 AM

    Nature displays her beauty in colors unsurpassed! Marvelous, Donna!

  1. Date: 11/5/2013 4:49:00 PM

    Hi Donna, A most colorful write! Well done my friend.. Ken

  1. Date: 11/4/2013 3:17:00 PM

    - A goodbye with a firework, a lovely poem Donna! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/4/2013 3:07:00 PM

    You have that special something that not many of us guys have! Whatever form of peotry you write... you master it! Kudos Donna dear Donna! Hugs, Jack xoox

  1. Date: 11/4/2013 3:07:00 PM

    Fall is so sad and so exquisite its hard to feel it all and let it go. Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/4/2013 2:31:00 PM

    This is definitely a beauty. Wow!! Thanks for such a kind comment on my poetry today. Have a great week. Hugs and love, Gail

  1. Date: 11/4/2013 12:38:00 PM

    great tanka my friend Donna. Cheers ;)

  1. Date: 11/4/2013 8:03:00 AM

    whooa, i want to dance with you... enchanting for a first try, my donns..:) soup mail!..

  1. Date: 11/4/2013 8:02:00 AM

    I do so love this time of year! Simple and effective piece makes me smile.

  1. Date: 11/4/2013 1:26:00 AM

    It might be your first attempt Donna. but you did very well. nice write....peter

  1. Date: 11/3/2013 9:55:00 PM

    Very nicely done, Donna! Would like to see more of this form from you :)

  1. Date: 11/3/2013 8:09:00 PM

    This is a very special write my friend, full of beauty of autumn glory! I really enjoyed reading this amazing poem this evening! What a fabulous piece, extremely awesome, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 11/3/2013 7:50:00 PM

    very nicely said :-)

  1. Date: 11/3/2013 1:38:00 PM

    Beautiful....MD....Swirling colors of beauty reflecting your lovely soul...Love you

  1. Date: 11/3/2013 12:42:00 PM

    Enjoyed reading this one today..The colors of fall are wonderful and are slowly falling off now...Thanks for stopping by..Your presence at my work is appreciated..The brown spider had not rebuilt his/her web this morning..There was just two little lengths of webbing up there..Sara

  1. Date: 11/3/2013 11:48:00 AM

    I'm sure it's obvious this is my first attempt at this form...:-) ...just trying to learn something different.....:-) ...just fun!

  1. Date: 11/3/2013 9:18:00 AM

    this short poem of yours give a delightful feeling of looking ahead for a better tomorrow. :)

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 11/3/2013 11:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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