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Eternal Breath

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Eternal Breath

See the chuckles of your children something has missing
The silent day that we used to have
The last cry that I ever spilled
Never know what brings me to these days

I don't have any clue nor any sense
Of the day when you tired of living
Your destiny seems like to be haywire
You rested on a beautiful thistly desire

Nighty night the moon sent its lambency
As your eternal breath continued your journey
Back to the nursery room through the gloom
See the babies asleep on your silent creep

In a second of gasp you're gone
I've been torn down by the barrier of my sanity
No tears that I abled to drop
For crowds already bathed you with their melancholy 

I still see you amid the empty space
I still sense you among all of us
Throw some jokes about sweet bitter of life
Your eternal breath continued in our times


Yanny Widjanarko 
Eternal Breath Free Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Gail Angel Doyle

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  1. Date: 12/11/2013 3:19:00 PM
    a sad one, Yanny and profound. Congrats for your win, dear.

  1. Date: 11/30/2013 7:52:00 AM
    Fantastic poem. Loved it.! Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 11/27/2013 4:05:00 AM
    Hi yanny many congrats on your top spot love xx

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 11/28/2013 6:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Mandy, congrats to you too :D hug, Yanny
  1. Date: 11/27/2013 12:56:00 AM
    It is a good poem, indeed. Congrats on your nice wine, Yanny. G.

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 11/28/2013 6:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Giorgio :D hug, Yanny
  1. Date: 11/26/2013 9:35:00 PM
    Congrats on your win, Yanny

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 11/28/2013 6:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Dr.Ram, :D hug, Yanny
  1. Date: 11/26/2013 8:21:00 PM
    Congratulations on your beautiful win..

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 11/28/2013 6:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Donna :D and glad to have your visit :D hug, Yanny
  1. Date: 11/26/2013 6:21:00 PM
    This is breathtakingly beautiful my dear Yanny, congratulations on your win xxx

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 11/28/2013 6:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Rose, :D yours are lovely too :D hug, Yanny
  1. Date: 11/26/2013 5:24:00 PM
    Yanny, , that is awesome how everyone got a first place... Now that's a fun loving way of saying. Back Off all you haters, it's my contest and I do and enjoy what I want. Love Gail, for that.... Every poem I read was beautiful so far.... ~Hugs & Congratulations with your "Eternal Breath" awesome win... Always ~ LINDA

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 11/26/2013 5:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Lol, thank you Linda, you really make my day :D hug, Yanny.
  1. Date: 11/26/2013 5:01:00 PM
    very powerful write a wonderful poem

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 11/26/2013 5:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Joseph, :) hug, Yanny
  1. Date: 11/26/2013 2:32:00 PM
    - Eternal Breath Contest: Sponsored by: Gail Angel Doyle - A contest that was at least for me a deep theme. - CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WINNING POEM, VERY SKILLED WRITTEN!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 11/26/2013 5:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Anne! :D hug, Yanny
  1. Date: 11/23/2013 7:55:00 AM
    That's a very deep and powerful verse Yannie and so sad to have felt it. It sure is a winning verse for me! Thanks for stopping by my verses. Light & Love

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 11/26/2013 5:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Debbie, what a pleasure to read your write too :D
  1. Date: 11/22/2013 4:15:00 PM
    Good afternoon Yanny.

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 11/26/2013 5:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Good afternoon Rick:D
  1. Date: 11/15/2013 7:56:00 AM
    - Take it easy .... feet up on the table .... Enjoy the weekend - eat good meat and healthy drinks, sweet friend Yanny !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 11/20/2013 9:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Lol, thanks Anne, I am more than relax after reading your second message lol, feel so healthy here :D
    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 11/15/2013 8:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - I must make sure that you relax a little.... lol. - Thanks for the pleasant visit and comments my friend Yanny. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 11/9/2013 9:57:00 AM
    Good morning Yanny.

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 11/20/2013 9:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Good afternoon Rick :D
  1. Date: 11/4/2013 8:05:00 AM
    Good morning Yanny.

  1. Date: 11/3/2013 1:20:00 PM
    This is so very sad, I think it will do very well in the contest. It was very nice to have your visit today.

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 11/3/2013 5:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Rick, glad to have your visit too :D wishing you a lovely day there, hug, Yanny
  1. Date: 11/3/2013 9:00:00 AM
    - Yanny, so heartbreaking and yet beautifully (I have one too) - Good luck in the contest! - All the best to you (+ no. one :) - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 11/3/2013 9:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Anne, glad to see your visit today, good luck to you too for the contest, I found yours beautiful as well :D hug, Yanny