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Sleep

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Whom did you dream of in your rare sleep?
Twas not I wrapped in your arms for sleep.

Fate, miles, and vows keep us apart 
When love returns and torments your sleep.

Whom did you romp with this night last?
Twas not I for my body does abhor sleep.

Send your love to me on arrows swift
At night my heart grieves to restore sleep

To cover distance, fate and time
Love returns, I beg more sleep.


© GG 3/11/2013

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  1. Date: 1/10/2014 4:24:00 PM

    Hi Mandy, .. I posted a new poem would you like to take a trip and read my poem..... You will find your name on my latest... hehehehHeheheh, WARNNING!!! It is a long poem... :) :) LINDA

  1. Date: 11/17/2013 7:28:00 PM

    Mandy, sleep is such wonderful inspiration, lovely ghazal!

  1. Date: 11/15/2013 10:45:00 AM

    Mandy, Congratulations, on your 'Take the Leap' win............ LOVE ~ SKAT ~

  1. Date: 11/14/2013 9:34:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win. Good job.

  1. Date: 11/13/2013 11:33:00 AM

    nicely penned....congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 11/12/2013 3:24:00 AM

    Congratulations on the win, Mandy

  1. Date: 11/8/2013 4:54:00 PM

    You nailed in now hon XXXOO

  1. Date: 11/7/2013 5:55:00 PM

    Thanks for the congrads on my crossing that bridge poem, and this as write of yours was wonderful and lovely Thank you golden girl for sharing.

  1. Date: 11/7/2013 4:30:00 PM

    ahhh, a sleep poem, after mine own heart!! Good one!

  1. Date: 11/7/2013 12:36:00 PM

    Magnificent write love. Thanks for stopping by to congratulate me today. Always love, Gail :)

  1. Date: 11/4/2013 12:10:00 PM

    great write my friend Mandy ;) Good luck and have a nice sleep!! :)

  1. Date: 11/4/2013 6:57:00 AM

    I like the old fashioned spice this flavored poem emits, you still got it baby, keep on, sooner are later the dream lover will return, hugs xxx

  1. Date: 11/4/2013 5:51:00 AM

    Enjoyed reading your creative lines this day..Thanks for the visit to my page.Sara

  1. Date: 11/3/2013 6:21:00 PM

    Okies Goldie you have the repeated word [sleep][it could be easier using -in sleep] correctly done now you have to get in the rhyming word BEFORE it, you use line 1 the word before SLEEP [the radeef] is RARE, rare is your word to rhyme with, so the word before Sleep in lines 1,2,4,6,8 MUST rhyme with RARE, that is called a [kaafiyaa]. You have time hon, Light & love

  1. Date: 11/3/2013 2:50:00 PM

    Good luck in Debbie's contest.

  1. Date: 11/3/2013 10:57:00 AM

    lovely write, my friend - hope you're feeling much better now x

  1. Date: 11/3/2013 9:42:00 AM

    Wow, Mandy,, this sure moves me,, amazing poetry, you are so talented...