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Grey of Day

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Grey of Day

In the grey of day Sun hidden behind the clouds Trees do look dismal The track to the forest lost Haze covers over the ground
Russell Sivey Contest: Tanka Me Fall or Winter Sponsor: Francine Roberts 11/2/2013

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  1. Date: 11/3/2013 3:22:00 PM
    What a dreamy scenery a masterpiece of painting!

  1. Date: 11/3/2013 10:06:00 AM
    love this beauty, my friend

  1. Date: 11/3/2013 7:56:00 AM
    ohh, mellow the mood signifying the essence of fall/winter .. and a stunning landsacape of words, russel...delighted to have read you today..:) huggs

  1. Date: 11/2/2013 7:07:00 PM
    Lovely Russell...track to the forest lost...excellent line.....

  1. Date: 11/2/2013 2:46:00 PM
    Interesting work penned..Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Gray of day is sometimes dismal but there is always intest in what is seen..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for the visits to my page.Sara

  1. Date: 11/2/2013 8:11:00 AM
    Lovely pen picture of the nature and good luck in the contest, Russell