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  1. Date: 12/5/2013 12:40:00 PM
    "It" kicked my butt!1 I threw my pen in the trash can!! You, Miss Becca are stellar! Looking for 8 Where is 8?

  1. Date: 11/17/2013 4:55:00 PM
    Wow! Amazing poem, Becca. Deeply expressed with great meaning. Enjoyable overall. Check out some of mine. Peace

  1. Date: 11/17/2013 2:25:00 AM
    no words to be said it in my head thank you

  1. Date: 11/10/2013 8:39:00 AM
    You outdid yourself here. Very impressive work. Hell of an ending...

  1. Date: 11/9/2013 8:25:00 AM
    What a wonderful poem. Again its a 7 from me and I look forward to reading more of your excellent work. I have listed you as a fav Poet. What a talent you are. Congrats on this wonderful poem and for sharing your work with us all in Poetry Soup.

  1. Date: 11/5/2013 5:19:00 PM
    This is a poem that cannot be interrupted. Once begun, it twists and turns, tangles and tynes so beguile and intrigue, it is ineluctable. Fortunately, I finished, or I couldn't have written this. Second time through.

  1. Date: 11/4/2013 1:45:00 PM
    A fav for me Becca, this is truly when you are at your best and you shine through!

  1. Date: 11/4/2013 11:04:00 AM
    Oh such profoundness,, yet pulls at the heartstrings Becca...

  1. Date: 11/4/2013 6:44:00 AM
    Impressive Becca ! Felt silly I missed out on this one.

  1. Date: 11/3/2013 8:00:00 PM
    Wow Becca, when you dig deep, you dig really deep. A powerful write that expresses the damage that words can do not only to the receiver but the one who uttered them. Think before you speak and you'll have less regrets is what we should all strive for. Awesome write! Hugs

  1. Date: 11/3/2013 7:01:00 AM
    Excellent. Great philosophy showered here. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs

  1. Date: 11/3/2013 6:44:00 AM
    There's something haunting yet soothing about this one Becca...awesome

  1. Date: 11/2/2013 4:20:00 PM
    A beautiful poem written with deep feelings. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla

  1. Date: 11/2/2013 11:49:00 AM
    Becca, this one is so good, so well told, so haunting in its metaphors, alliterations--and all the rest--that I almost wonder what more can be written. Mark

  1. Date: 11/2/2013 9:51:00 AM
    You dug deep and uncovered all our emotions in the process. Words really do have healing properties.

  1. Date: 11/2/2013 9:05:00 AM
    Hi dear Becca..Your name defines and me.I.can nearly touch the pain hereLife is full of what if we didn t say or do that or what if We did maybe things would be different.Life is full of regrets yet each and every regret is a way for us to grow stronger knowing there is still time for things to do in our life that we didn t yet do and for other past happenings we need to make peace with.I can feel your verse lingering in my heart.Us human all so alike dear..big hug

  1. Date: 11/2/2013 6:42:00 AM
    the hello and goodbye of life---so hauntingly beautiful, becca...your deep insights astound!.. grreat work!

  1. Date: 11/1/2013 3:30:00 PM
    awesome write Becca....but the it remains a mystery.....thanks for stopping by

  1. Date: 11/1/2013 3:05:00 PM
    An excellent poem depicting the inner feeling with philosophical style. It's so wonderfully adorned that a nice picture of reality of life is seen from different angles, my friend. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 11/1/2013 1:46:00 PM
    I agree with Richard, that line "Carrying fistfuls of words, as a currency for a fair exchange" was my favorite line as well! Excellent work here! I hope you're doing well. I will catch up, promise! MC