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Below is the poem entitled Eros which was written by poet Ken Carroll. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Eros

The early morning
harbors our secrets

I am lifted
by her love

Surrounded and fed
embraced by her love

Late at night
I compare
the moon to her face

But the moon
does not have
her ruby sweet lips

Sex was the seed
her kisses the flower
passion is our fragrance...

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  1. Date: 12/4/2013 4:46:00 PM
    I like the gentleness in this :) Thanks so much for stopping by, reading and commenting on my verse. Light & Love

    Carroll Avatar Ken Carroll
    Date: 12/4/2013 4:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you as well Debbie for visiting.. Ken
  1. Date: 11/9/2013 12:39:00 AM
    A very beautiful poem!

    Carroll Avatar Ken Carroll
    Date: 11/9/2013 8:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Arthur.. Ken
  1. Date: 11/6/2013 10:59:00 AM
    short phrases, strong words, which made this free verse a great write to read.

    Carroll Avatar Ken Carroll
    Date: 11/6/2013 11:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Alfred, Thank you my friend.. Ken
  1. Date: 11/6/2013 9:15:00 AM
    Very, very romantic. Great poem. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla

    Carroll Avatar Ken Carroll
    Date: 11/6/2013 11:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hola Lucilla, Gracias por leer! Ken
  1. Date: 11/5/2013 11:59:00 PM
    Very nicely written Ken filled with love and passion, well done....peter

    Carroll Avatar Ken Carroll
    Date: 11/6/2013 4:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Peter for the kind comment.. Ken
  1. Date: 11/3/2013 10:43:00 AM
    the flow of this work blends with the wave of passion running along this page, ken..." but the moon does not have her ruby sweet lips.." that nailed it!..:) huggs

    Carroll Avatar Ken Carroll
    Date: 11/3/2013 5:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Nette, Thank you for the wonderful comment! Ken
  1. Date: 11/2/2013 11:14:00 PM
    Splendid passionate write this is my dear friend Ken. A great write indeed. Thank you so much for sharing! Thank you so much as well for taking your time to read my first horror story/poem. thank you so much for everything! have a nice weekend! love lots and big hugs, Leonora

    Carroll Avatar Ken Carroll
    Date: 11/2/2013 11:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Leonora, Thank you for a lovely visit.. Ken
  1. Date: 11/2/2013 5:49:00 PM
    this is awesome poetry,,

    Carroll Avatar Ken Carroll
    Date: 11/2/2013 6:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Harry, Thank you for the most kind comment.. Ken
  1. Date: 10/31/2013 8:14:00 PM
    I love how you compare her to the moon...the moon is soft, sensual and beautiful as is your poem...fine piece of writing Ken :)

    Carroll Avatar Ken Carroll
    Date: 10/31/2013 8:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Sandra, Thank you for the beautiful visit.. Ken
  1. Date: 10/31/2013 5:13:00 PM
    dazzling beautiful piece old friend

    Carroll Avatar Ken Carroll
    Date: 10/31/2013 5:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hey Liam, thanks buddy for the wonderful comment. Ken
  1. Date: 10/31/2013 3:59:00 PM
    :) Eros....yes, physical love......beautiful..as is your write, Ken......Fantastic work. The moon comparison is so lovely...Here, when someone is beautiful, they call her...Moon. I loved this...

    Carroll Avatar Ken Carroll
    Date: 10/31/2013 4:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Eileen, thank you my friend for stopping by.. Ken
  1. Date: 10/31/2013 2:45:00 PM
    Ahhh!!! Passionate work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

    Carroll Avatar Ken Carroll
    Date: 10/31/2013 2:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Sara, thank you for stopping by to read this one! Ken
  1. Date: 10/31/2013 1:43:00 PM
    Your poem has a sweet scent of its own Ken; very beautiful. :)

    Carroll Avatar Ken Carroll
    Date: 10/31/2013 1:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi F.J., thank you for a lovely visit today! Ken