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Fiddling and Footling With the Super Duper Soupers

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Fiddling and Footling With the Super Duper Soupers

Well if it isn’t the Italian Princess herself! I just KNEW we’d finally meet. It must be our:
Karma,
Charma
(Whatcha say we…Ow! Look, you left a mark)

I swear to GOD I haven’t been drinking Deb! It’s YOU that’s making me all:
Woozy,
Guzzi
(Hold me up whouldja cher? Ohh yeah)

Wow, I’m trippin’ out Ortello! It’s like FAR OUT to rap with you man and those threads are like:
Groovin’
Ruben
(I’m an old hippie, what did you expect?)

Well look who’s here! Andrea, the sonnet queen herself! What you drinkin girl? How bout some:
Brandy,
Andie?
(Or maybe some ‘Southern Comfort?’ Ouch! You too?)

OH-MY-GOD, its Ms. Claudon-I-I-mean ONCLAUD (gulp) you’re getting me all:
Sweaty,
Nettie!
(Here, check my pulse)

C’mon Ms. Richards! Let’s take a walk and have a nice long talk about poetry…Why do you:
Tarry,
Carrie?
(I KNOW you’re busy but I’m SO lonely)

The Flower of the East! May I have this dance? Whew! Lordy me...Do I detect the sweet aroma of:
Jasmine,
Yasmin?
(This was SUPPOSED to be for your contest but I footled around and didn’t read the footling RULES)

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  1. Date: 1/8/2014 2:25:00 PM
    Too cute; well your "footle" is lovely Tim!

  1. Date: 12/4/2013 3:25:00 PM
    I love it when you address us super dupers..You have a way with it: : ).Im.going to favour this gem B-).Still smiling : )

  1. Date: 11/19/2013 8:55:00 PM
    Oh Tim..this is a darling fun write....:-) :-) :-) :-)

  1. Date: 11/18/2013 3:49:00 PM
    A very charming and fun tribute to some of the talented poets here on the Soup! I enjoyed the read! Great work, Tim!...Thank you so much for the wonderful comments on my poem, "Let The Rain Fall". It really means a lot! :)

  1. Date: 11/16/2013 5:20:00 PM
    Much fun! Tim! Thanks for stopping by!

  1. Date: 11/14/2013 3:57:00 AM
    I love this fun write!!!!

  1. Date: 11/7/2013 9:43:00 AM
    Well FOOT!!! Another invitation to a Soup gathering that got lost in the mail.... Great writing, Tim..... Jake

  1. Date: 11/3/2013 11:45:00 PM
    interesting. ..luv..Linda

  1. Date: 11/3/2013 5:21:00 PM
    I'm late in googling this little doodle of a footle, and though me thinks you are out of your noodle, Oh, lordy, it's oodles and caboodles of fun !!! !!

  1. Date: 11/2/2013 6:24:00 AM
    tim!.. you wicked, sweet man.. if you so ever come here again, i'll make you sweat under the leyte or boracay heat, lol... you are a footle master! charming write..:) huggs

  1. Date: 11/1/2013 6:03:00 PM
    cute one for us, Tim. How ironic that the one drink I ever tried was actually brandy. it Sucks though, like i imagine they all do!! Love when you footle!! I did another poem on the family of Wounded thunder.

  1. Date: 10/31/2013 2:11:00 PM
    Hey cher, you cheating on me again ;) [well at least I got in the top 2!] no pretty in pink was not me LOL I was always a RED girl, I was never shy, I could read the dictionary out loud at 5! I never hid and if anyone gave me trouble I told them off ROYAL [have mouth will travel LOL, same old same old aye?] and I like to encourage you to make an ole gals heart go pitter patter by writing one about if we really meet [I can live vicariously!] Light & Love

  1. Date: 10/31/2013 1:08:00 PM
    - Tim, I love it .... Even if you forgot ME!! - HAPPY HALLOWEEN! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)))))

  1. Date: 10/31/2013 9:24:00 AM
    All the same it is a nice treat, enjoyed Tim