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  1. Date: 1/23/2014 10:40:00 AM
    well done, This Maiden meets compare... loving it...Linda

  1. Date: 11/11/2013 6:47:00 PM
    Perfection my Yassie...Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/11/2013 9:56:00 AM
    A very creative take and well deserved win Yasmin!

  1. Date: 11/11/2013 2:17:00 AM
    Hey, good one, Yasmin. Brevity rules. I know you'll do well in the contest. I'm rooting for you. Licia ;-)

  1. Date: 11/10/2013 11:05:00 PM
    I love how you captured her expression. congrats. BG

  1. Date: 11/10/2013 6:17:00 PM
    beautiful poem painted the picture nicely with your words... congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 11/10/2013 7:42:00 AM
    Great winning work..Congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 11/9/2013 6:08:00 PM
    I'm happy to finally see your entry in the contest and how well it did, sweetie. Congrats to you. She certainly is yearning and you captured that feeling so well.

  1. Date: 11/3/2013 4:40:00 AM
    Reads like a winner..It has good flow and rhyme within its lines..Enjoyed reading it this morning..Sara

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    Date: 11/3/2013 4:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for the honor of being in the winners' list in your contest..It was fun writing that one..Sara
  1. Date: 11/3/2013 4:24:00 AM
    beautifully penned yasmin....good luck in the contest :) hugs

  1. Date: 11/2/2013 7:52:00 AM
    Yield to the temptation first thing, Yassie, nice one!!

  1. Date: 10/31/2013 2:16:00 PM
    Like a untouched angel .... beautiful my friend Yasmin !! - Luck in contest ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/31/2013 2:08:00 PM
    Hi yasmin, A most sensual write. Ken

  1. Date: 10/31/2013 8:16:00 AM
    Very swaft in the telling of the senses my Sweet Princess, lest not you succumb into temptation, my dear, keep your wits about you, sending you fresh roses for your kitchenette, love you girl, xxx

  1. Date: 10/31/2013 7:48:00 AM
    If this isn't in the winners list I will be severely disappointed! This surely deserves the highest honors my friend! I really enjoyed reading this grandiose poem this morning Yasmin! What a fabulous piece, Great Work!!