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Soothing Waters


The music is soft as the warm water flows.
Your eyes widened as your mind glows.

The warm bath is inviting as you ease into the source.
Your mind is free to travel down a special course.

You lean back with a glass of wine as the candles dimly light the room.
You close your eyes and breathe as the imagination swoons.

The water glides slowly against your skin as you drift into a dream.
The ocean a majestic blue, creates a breathtaking scene.

The sounds of the ocean echo in your mind.
The waves rush up the shore and cool your feet a feeling truly sublime.

The wine caresses your lips as you drink in the pleasure.
Your mind and body relaxed as you melt into a dream filled treasure.

Your thoughts dance as you relieve simpler times.
The exciting you now awakened with rhythmic sounds and rhyme.

The day begins to close as the sunburst hues light the sky.
So relaxed and tingling you smile with a sigh.


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  1. Date: 10/30/2013 7:34:00 PM
    a very soothing write... your poem comes with a beautiful reflection... romantic filled with passion... love the 5 couplet set..., The sounds of the ocean echo in your mind. The waves rush up the shore and cool your feet a feeling truly sublime.... xox~ LINDA

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    Date: 10/30/2013 8:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you. The words came to me quickly. I wanted the reader to visualize the warm water as it caressed her body as she tasted the wine in a dream :)
  1. Date: 10/30/2013 5:30:00 PM
    very beautiful. Enjoyed. hugs, catie :)

    Boy Avatar Nature Boy
    Date: 10/30/2013 8:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you very much :)