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  1. Date: 11/27/2013 10:41:00 PM
    I love this! Fierce! :)

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 11/28/2013 10:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Jay...with the mood I was in I kinda liked this one myself lol.
  1. Date: 11/12/2013 11:35:00 PM
    wow love that last line: use your trash to feed my flame!! Yes, indeed it was an interesting contest. Congrats for your win.

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 11/13/2013 12:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hey Andrea; thank you...my husband liked that part too lol
  1. Date: 11/12/2013 8:12:00 PM
    very powerful write...well crafted...congrats on your win :)

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 11/12/2013 10:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Sandra :)
  1. Date: 11/12/2013 12:12:00 PM
    Hi F.J., you crafted this perfectly for this unique contest challenge.Congrats on your well deserved win:)

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 11/12/2013 12:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hey there Karen, thank you, I'm glad you like it.
  1. Date: 11/12/2013 11:17:00 AM
    congrats on your win FJ

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 11/12/2013 11:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Joseph :)
  1. Date: 11/12/2013 9:51:00 AM
    FJ---A truly talented poet you are and a great reinvention of one of the sponsor's poems! Also, congrats on your win in the contest....much deserved! Julie :-)

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 11/12/2013 11:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Julie, and thanks so much for your kind words!
  1. Date: 11/12/2013 8:04:00 AM
    Keep feeding those flames. This was so well done. Congratulations.

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 11/12/2013 9:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Richard; Chan gave me something to enjoy with this one!
  1. Date: 11/12/2013 6:39:00 AM
    FJ, You're right about that, this is an interesting contest and you have done it proud! Congratulations

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 11/12/2013 7:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much Craig! :)
  1. Date: 11/10/2013 7:27:00 PM
    You are a kind person F.J.! I smile at you :) 7. G.

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 11/10/2013 7:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I have actually become that yes Giorgio :) I did truly enjoy his contest. It allowed a bit of my youth to resurface lol. Thank you for the smile.
  1. Date: 11/4/2013 8:20:00 AM
    Whoa, very intense FJ. I have to admit, this power that you can achieve with just words....does kind of scare me a little ;) Great job I love it

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 11/4/2013 7:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    LOL Jeremiah! Thank you very much.
  1. Date: 11/3/2013 3:22:00 PM
    The heat is on! Impressive write.

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 11/4/2013 7:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    :) Always! Thanks Mike :)
  1. Date: 11/3/2013 12:37:00 AM
    That's good -that's real good!

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 11/3/2013 7:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Jan! It was fun.
  1. Date: 11/2/2013 5:06:00 PM
    Your writing has a unique electric voltage I love it.and I will definatly say sumthin on your constest 'I spit fire'. Love the theme already.

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 11/3/2013 7:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    After your "Poem of Labor" I thought you might enjoy this one lol. Thanks Raymond
  1. Date: 11/2/2013 11:45:00 AM
    I keep looking for a clue! : D Is trash talking something about rage? Brutal honesty?

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 11/3/2013 6:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ....basically the good ones we're either friends or at least shared a respect for the other's ability. They would articulate their superiority of skill over the other person's. Whether it was rapping, sports, intellect, etc.
    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 11/3/2013 6:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ...the word games could be quite amazing at times! RAP means rhythm and poetry for a reason ;). You just cannot tell by most of what makes it to the radio these days.
    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 11/3/2013 6:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    LOL Rueben you would think so but it was generally done among those with a certain talent to show off their lyrical word skill; aka free style rap/poetry slams. We're talking "old school South" though. Not the foolishness you hear today.
  1. Date: 10/31/2013 7:48:00 PM
    Bravo nicely written. and thank you for your comments on duct tape. but don't forget the Gorilla glue.lol

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 11/1/2013 8:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    LOL oh man how did I forget that?! Thank you Cheri
  1. Date: 10/31/2013 1:47:00 PM
    Hi F.J., A powerful write from you..Thanks for your visit to my verse.. Ken

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 10/31/2013 5:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Ken! It was fun getting to interpret one of Archaic Poets poems.
  1. Date: 10/31/2013 3:22:00 AM
    Fiery.... Love this work!!!

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 10/31/2013 11:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    :) Thank you Bindu
  1. Date: 10/30/2013 8:52:00 PM
    I like the power in your words. Many speak of power yet cannot control it whereas you thrive with it. Well done very nice read :)

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 10/30/2013 9:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I am very flattered; thank you Gregory.
  1. Date: 10/30/2013 3:50:00 PM
    FJ, best of luck in the contest and I want to thank you so much for my wonderful placement in your Make Me Feel You Contest, I am honoured with my placement, I gather there is a cash prize, could you please donate whatever the prize is to a charity of your choice, thank you so much,

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 10/30/2013 6:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I most certainly will; there is a new program for trafficking victims here in La I would be honored to make that donation to in your name :)
  1. Date: 10/30/2013 3:25:00 PM
    Such ferocity and strength. The core message, utter brilliance.

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 10/30/2013 7:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Ha. Indeed. :)
    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 10/30/2013 6:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Drake; my husband said I was always good at "trash talking!" lol
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