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IN A FAR AWAY ISLAND

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IN A FAR AWAY ISLAND

                                          It happened when I traveled to Fantasia,
                                              Riding in an old ship called Galactica,
                                            There’s a super storm name Nympha,
                                           That’s why our ship turned into pieces,
                                         That’s the beginning of my endless stories.

                                         It’s my 10 years alone in a far away island,
                                          Surrounded by the most beautiful sands,
                                     My way of living is so simple and a little bit hard,
                                  But I overcome it and I survived as God is my guard.

                                         One day while I’m having my hearty lunch,
                                            I heard a loud sound from a distance,
                                             It’s a helicopter with some soldiers,
                                             They are here!! At last my rescuers!

                                           Before I leave the unforgettable place,
                                   I would take with me my precious old necklace,
                                  An old paper with my ten years of hand writings,
                                  And a white single shell with a beautiful carvings

                                             During my stay in a mysterious world,
                                           Memorable things make me go on living,
                                  For they are my strength and it really my treasured,
                                     I will cherish all the experiences and sufferings,
                        Today I feel happiness in my heart and the pain finally cured.


                                                            October 30, 2013
                            For Shadow Hamilton's "What Would You Take " contest
                                                            5th Place Winner
                                          

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  1. Date: 11/9/2013 11:29:00 AM
    Liked the first two liens especially! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 11/7/2013 9:56:00 AM
    Maria, , Cheers on your winning poem...... SKAT LOVE :) :)

  1. Date: 11/6/2013 7:45:00 PM
    HI MARIA , nicely done.... congrats in Shadow's contest.... xox~ LINDA

  1. Date: 11/6/2013 6:21:00 AM
    Beautiful work! Congrats on your win Maria! G.

  1. Date: 11/4/2013 5:13:00 PM
    congrats on a fine win Maria

  1. Date: 11/4/2013 4:16:00 PM
    Congrats on your great winning work..Way to go..Sara

  1. Date: 11/4/2013 9:42:00 AM
    soo interesting, paz... pinays are goood!..:) congrats and huggs

  1. Date: 11/4/2013 4:17:00 AM
    Hi sweetie, nice win and well deserved xx

  1. Date: 11/3/2013 6:30:00 PM
    love your take on the theme and how you crafted this poem...congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 11/3/2013 5:13:00 PM
    Congratulations..... beautiful poem

  1. Date: 11/3/2013 2:58:00 PM
    Congrats Maria on your winning poem xxx

  1. Date: 11/3/2013 2:15:00 PM
    Maria congrats on placing in my contest Shadow x smile

  1. Date: 11/3/2013 7:27:00 AM
    Excellent. Well penned. Nice poem. Enjoyed. Tfs

  1. Date: 11/2/2013 11:23:00 PM
    You penned an awesome poem my very dear friend Maria. This poem adduces your amazing,highly imaginative talent and creativity. Two thumbs up here! I love it and I was thoroughly delighted to read it this morning. A winner for me! Good luck in the contest always! Biggest hugs to you from me! love always & 4evr, Leonora

  1. Date: 10/31/2013 1:52:00 AM
    I really like the imaginative way you did this contest, making the three items be things that were very valuable to you from a different perspective. Very clever.

  1. Date: 10/30/2013 9:15:00 PM
    your poem is wonderful Maria, i am happy for you and the healing...luv~ LINDA

  1. Date: 10/30/2013 12:36:00 PM
    - A good story and good choices, Maria - Wish you luck in the contest ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)