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SEPARATION

SEPARATION 

The closeness we once had 
was a light shining in the dark. 
Storm clouds came 
and shielded the sun. 

The seeds atrophied 
and the sprouts withered. 
What was once a rainbow 
became a black and white
single brush stroke 
against a pale sky. 

CAK 9-2013

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  1. Date: 12/2/2013 4:00:00 PM
    Well written Alan! Oh, the depth of that single brush stroke!

  1. Date: 11/3/2013 2:27:00 PM
    I hear you talking, Allen. When the black and white moves into the act everything changes and things don's always mean what they used to.

  1. Date: 11/1/2013 5:55:00 PM
    Nice... Terry

  1. Date: 10/30/2013 4:35:00 PM
    Allan i notice the difference when i saw your name and his philosophy on reincarnation. Yes i studied world religion. And i think that i have a handle on your religion more than i do his.

  1. Date: 10/30/2013 3:48:00 PM
    - Beautiful metaphors .... sad event, Allan. - Well done. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

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    Date: 10/30/2013 3:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Anne.
  1. Date: 10/30/2013 9:07:00 AM
    Short and to the point. But vivid.

  1. Date: 10/30/2013 6:22:00 AM
    Stunning write! Masterful way of taking an abstract feeling and describing it with concrete images.

  1. Date: 10/30/2013 4:30:00 AM
    Awesome, a very powerful write!!

  1. Date: 10/29/2013 10:51:00 PM
    "Storm clouds came and shielded the sun's growth"...that line says so much. Awesome expression of love's separation.

  1. Date: 10/29/2013 5:53:00 PM
    Love this beautiful piece, Allan! A well-penned verse indeed! Julie :-)