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  1. Date: 11/1/2013 11:42:00 AM
    Jon: Right to the heart of issue in plain, but poetic speech. Short and sweet. I love it. I tightened up my quatrain, "Patterns and Prose."Maybe you could take a look and tell me what you think. I also posted another poem, kind of dark called "Dying with Regret." Mark

    Cavanaugh Avatar Jon A Cavanaugh
    Date: 11/2/2013 8:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you
  1. Date: 10/31/2013 1:55:00 AM
    Duh..wish they had a 3-5 minute edit button on this site....I had to put in the #1 for the site to accept the corrected comment..." or" was not supposed to be..must be my dyslexic fingers...

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    Date: 10/31/2013 2:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I've run into all kinds of bugs on the soup.
  1. Date: 10/31/2013 1:52:00 AM
    Loved this one, but even a blind "man" or knows the real title...hehehe..

    Cavanaugh Avatar Jon A Cavanaugh
    Date: 10/31/2013 2:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I wish I could find a title that i like for this poem. I have only a couple and don't really like either one. They were "Contrary" and "Who let the dogs out" I need one deceptively misleading and funny.
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    Date: 10/31/2013 2:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you.
  1. Date: 10/30/2013 12:34:00 PM
    So true! Good one Jon! Hugs

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    Date: 10/30/2013 11:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Cecilla
  1. Date: 10/30/2013 5:06:00 AM
    Well I have heard of a lying hound dog...Cute one ...Got a chuckle..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

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    Date: 10/30/2013 9:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you. Were you a big Elvis fan?
  1. Date: 10/30/2013 12:48:00 AM
    A little gem that sparkles with truth, sadly. I love the way you write. Mahalo

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    Date: 10/30/2013 9:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Connie
  1. Date: 10/29/2013 11:02:00 PM
    Loved this write Jon. It seems to be the right of all people to lie. in this world it is It seems a necessity....Peter

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    Date: 10/29/2013 11:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


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  1. Date: 10/29/2013 8:15:00 PM
    Indeed! Not to mention animals kill for survival and we kill for sport. Thought provoking poem. Thanks for stopping by. Michael .

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    Date: 10/29/2013 10:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


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  1. Date: 10/29/2013 6:50:00 PM
    you are DA MAN!!! this is hilarious, jon! thank you for the smile tonight - i needed it!

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    Date: 10/29/2013 10:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    And thank you for all the joy and laughter you bring into my life.
  1. Date: 10/29/2013 4:24:00 PM
    lovely write, my friend

    Cavanaugh Avatar Jon A Cavanaugh
    Date: 10/29/2013 10:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


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  1. Date: 10/29/2013 3:38:00 PM
    And just why do we do it? If only we could talk to the animals! A good piece, Jon :) Many thanks for your visits - check out "The Pig - The Finale" when you get the chance :)

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    Date: 10/29/2013 10:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you
  1. Date: 10/29/2013 3:38:00 PM
    You have a great thinking mind which you then employ to come up with awesome little poems such as this one. Great job, Jon!

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    Date: 10/29/2013 10:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so very much Andrea
  1. Date: 10/29/2013 3:29:00 PM
    What a powerful piece, Jon......WOW

    Cavanaugh Avatar Jon A Cavanaugh
    Date: 10/29/2013 11:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Eileen
  1. Date: 10/29/2013 1:39:00 PM
    oh like it Jon, well done and so true xx

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    Date: 10/29/2013 11:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you