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I'll Have Another, and Keep'em Comin'

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I'll Have Another, and Keep'em Comin'

In awe and angst, my Mind exploding-
Near to truth, but nothing knowing! 
In Sadness sought, my Soul is sewing;
Weaving woes my Heart bestowing 
Exhausted brain, too drained for thinking, 
For in Wells of Worry I am sinking...
I might as well just keep on drinking-
And all around me, Poets singing
Songs of old and tunes of yore-
Words that torch me to my core
One more draught, dropped to the floor,
And I can hear their Hymns no more...

*Pardon Me, Did you Just...Contest Entry
~JustLivingLies

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  1. Date: 2/3/2014 7:42:00 PM
    I saved this as a favorite...

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet
    Date: 2/4/2014 9:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Line 5 is weak and problematic; any suggestions?
  1. Date: 11/2/2013 1:58:00 PM
    Bravo! I'll be back frequently for more!

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet
    Date: 11/2/2013 2:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, Carol; I appreciate that :)
  1. Date: 10/30/2013 4:56:00 PM
    Chan The Man Of course you would write something this silly and crazy. Drinking so much you pass out. BAD BOY !! LOL Thanks for the nice comment on my Accept Me poem. Hugs

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet
    Date: 10/31/2013 8:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I used to drink like a fish but I'm better these days ;) Thanks, Sweet Pea! <3
  1. Date: 10/29/2013 9:52:00 AM
    Very clever and I really like how it flows! Pour me another!

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet
    Date: 10/29/2013 11:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Will do, my friend! Thanks for stopping by a for the review :)
  1. Date: 10/28/2013 7:30:00 PM
    Excellent rhyme, AP; Loved the title :). Thoroughly enjoyed the read! Many thanks for your visits to my page

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet
    Date: 10/29/2013 9:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, Miss Wattle; I appreciate you dropping by and for the review. Enjoyed reading your work :)
  1. Date: 10/28/2013 2:35:00 PM
    I certainly enjoy your rhyming and wit throughout. Very nicely structure and a great pleasure to read. :) We can sure get and feel so lost when it comes to alcohol and a part of us sometimes wants to be lost, but it aint worth it... Always, Laura

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet
    Date: 10/28/2013 2:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for stopping by and for the read and review, Laura. I very much appreciate it :)
  1. Date: 10/28/2013 1:40:00 PM
    Ironic indeed... I turned the computer on and started writing. Then I read it after I posted it and saw yours? That has been happening to me a lot lately? Yea... I've been trying to stay away from that train. But when it comes a calling, it's hard to ignore that damn whistle! :o) Nice write... Thanks for the comment.

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet
    Date: 10/28/2013 2:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for stopping by and for the review; enjoyed your work! :)
  1. Date: 10/28/2013 1:28:00 PM
    Lovely...Very interesting....Nostalgia written all over the place. Thanks ever so much for your visit to my work!

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet
    Date: 10/28/2013 2:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for the read and review; enjoyed reading your work :)
  1. Date: 10/28/2013 1:11:00 PM
    I really enjoyed your beautiful poem -Charma

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet
    Date: 10/28/2013 1:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, Charma; it makes me happy that you enjoyed it :)