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                               one finger pulls upon the trigger
                                 opening a door to darkness
                                  a shooting pain aches within
                                    shadowed in dark falling
                                        pulling emotions 
                                         feelings shot  down
                                           in one heart
                                              deep hurt
                                                  died

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  1. Date: 10/29/2013 4:58:00 PM
    Ouch Liam, can't put a band aid on this one, hugs xxx does it make it better?

  1. Date: 10/29/2013 12:07:00 PM
    Hey Liam, An emotional write for sure.Little on the dark side but well expressed my friend.. Ken

  1. Date: 10/29/2013 12:28:00 AM
    piercing me to the core, liam.. superbly written!.. how are you?..:) huggs

  1. Date: 10/28/2013 11:49:00 AM
    This is so sad..and heartwrenching Liam