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Take Me Back


October 27, 2013



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  1. Date: 12/5/2013 6:29:00 PM

    Becca Becca Becca... What do I Give to a lady who writes like you do? Hmmmmmm.........ADMIRATION!

  1. Date: 11/17/2013 2:29:00 AM

    The ending says it all beautiful

  1. Date: 11/1/2013 3:34:00 PM

    well penned Becca....best wishes

  1. Date: 11/1/2013 6:20:00 AM

    I got behind on my replies here, but I wanted you all to know that I appreciate your comments very much! Each and every comment means so much to me, and I keep each one like it's a treasure. Every one of YOU mean so much to me too... thank you for reading my poems :) Hugs <3

  1. Date: 11/1/2013 4:13:00 AM

    Very beautiful free verse, Becca. Sensitive, sensual and loving! G.

  1. Date: 10/31/2013 1:28:00 PM

    Id love to go back to the good times you just have to find or make new ones love your write as always full of emotion thanks for coments on mine hope you well too xx davidscott

  1. Date: 10/30/2013 9:34:00 PM

    Hey Becca, This is a wonderful poem! You certainly took me back.

  1. Date: 10/30/2013 12:37:00 PM

    We all wish for those carefree days of our youth....but it's never to late to start new dreams. Heartfelt write Becca! Hugs

  1. Date: 10/30/2013 10:59:00 AM

    Impressive write. One of passion and yearning. Good job

  1. Date: 10/29/2013 10:25:00 PM

    Becca, this touched me deeply. I especially like "and breezes would become gusts of years gone by." I treasure similar memories, but it's never quite enough. Mark

  1. Date: 10/29/2013 1:55:00 PM

    Hi! my lovely friend, you are going back to touch the sweet memories of the past, beautifully adorned the sweet feeling with nice words. Lovely done. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 10/29/2013 12:23:00 PM

    Breezy years,carefree days and you are floating in each lines.This is so good to read your sad and emotions ... liked it

  1. Date: 10/29/2013 10:48:00 AM

    All the waaaaay Exquisite!!!!!!

  1. Date: 10/29/2013 9:44:00 AM

    Stunning and beautifully written. Your references to the breezy and carefree feelings mixed with pangs of loss. Favorite line of many " And breezes would become gusts of years gone by". Amazing

  1. Date: 10/29/2013 8:37:00 AM

    Oh Yeah !! Can identify with this one after 28 years of marriage-- great depiction of how we so easily lose the fundamental passion we initially share with our partners. Beautiful read.

  1. Date: 10/29/2013 6:38:00 AM

    a heart felt cry Becca everyday life can take of the shine. Yet a little care puts it back great write ty for visiting my page Shadow x smile

  1. Date: 10/28/2013 10:20:00 PM

    It's a heart touching write Becca, where melting words of beautiful memories are coming from the depths of your heart. These memories of love are always precious and you have painted them beautifully in this sweet write and thank you for your kind words on my Song. Love and best wishes always..Ravindra K Kapoor

  1. Date: 10/28/2013 10:17:00 PM

    It's a heart touching write Becca, where melting words of beautiful memories are coming from the depths of your heart. These memories of love are always precious and you have painted them beautifully in this sweet write and thank you for your kind words on my Song. Love and best wishes always..Ravindra K Kapoor

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 10/28/2013 10:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you very much Ravindra.
  1. Date: 10/28/2013 7:40:00 PM

    You have such a tender heart, my dear sweet Rebecca! Trust me it CAN be recaptured dear friend! It takes two hearts beating in unison and the knowledge and the acceptance that the years go by but real true love remains! A memorable write dear friend! Miss Wattle has discovered what I've known for a while! BTW She is an absolute sweetheart as well with the same beauty inside! Love ya... xoxoxoxox

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 10/28/2013 7:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    It's the two hearts beating in unison that is the hard part lol but yes I understand what you're saying. Thank you for your wisdom... and especially for your friendship xoxo
  1. Date: 10/28/2013 7:07:00 PM

    Becca, you have become one of my favourite poets in the short time since I joined P-Soup. I am enthralled by your style as you write so eloquently of love. I find myself sighing as I read each stanza of your work. This piece is no exception. It is beautiful and flows exceptionally well. I love the free verse style. //MW

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 10/28/2013 7:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Wow, MW, you have paid me such a high compliment!!! That really means a lot to me, thank you so very much! I feel the same about you, I love your work, and I love your kindness. <3
  1. Date: 10/28/2013 6:57:00 PM

    What wonderful thoughts to return to days when dreams did not seem so impossible. This poem brings those dreams back into focus! I hope you and your husband reach those distant shores and celebrate still being together. a relationship that survives over decades is far from ordinary. the fact you are together means a dream continues to come true!

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 10/28/2013 7:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Over three decades for us :) Where did the time go? Thank you Rick, you're very encouraging.
  1. Date: 10/28/2013 3:18:00 PM

    I love the sincerity and honesty coming from these words. I can almost see the expression on your face. I also want to point out the creative use of five lines in each stanza. It kind of gives you more options in choosing which words to rhyme. You didn't necessarily follow a rhyme pattern, you just did want you want and I love that. It worked brilliantly. Excellent job Becca.

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 10/28/2013 4:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You're comment is very nice, thank you Jeremiah! Yes for some reason I love the 5 line stanza... I usually write ababb (English quintain) but this time, I didn't follow a rhyme pattern, yet I still lean toward rhyming, as you noticed! :) Thank you so much!
  1. Date: 10/28/2013 2:09:00 PM

    Although it is a fantastic poem I have to underlie the fact that happiness lie ahead! The past has given us what it had to offer but now is past! A new day will come with all its promises intact, when it does we have to grab it and never let it go for we deserve better! Excellent poem!

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 10/28/2013 3:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes you are so right. I've heard it said that "dwelling in the past only blinds you to the future" or something like that, I guess it's true... :) thanks for your awesome comment Demetrios :) xoxo
  1. Date: 10/28/2013 11:19:00 AM

    compelling work of art, becca...sadly beautiful; love has a way of teaching us bittersweet lessons..:) much enjoyed!...huggs

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 10/28/2013 12:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much, Nette ... I'm always happy to hear from you! Hugs <3
  1. Date: 10/28/2013 9:50:00 AM

    Your words are so deep and profound Becca.Its sad that passion doesn t last forever yet its joyful that love does at least..and because We love that other person through the changes in emotions and through life becoming a routine is the only reason to stay strong..To yearn for those past special moments is somehow dreamy ,To live it again is that dream come true,Sometimes its so easy to be taken forgranted,yet that doesn t mean we re not loved..I feel like im in your shoe dear.So deep yr thought

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 10/28/2013 10:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Your comment brings tears to my eyes. You've really touched me with your words here, Charmaine. You're right, even when the romance is gone, the love remains, and that is what's important. Thank you sweetie. I'm sorry you understand this so well, you're still so young... I wish all the best for you in this life, my friend. Big hugs <3
  1. Date: 10/28/2013 6:42:00 AM

    Becca you are speaking from the heart here, such longing belongs to old lovers of the world, you words touch me, and know this, they are deeply understood, sending my love to you via air waves xxx

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 10/28/2013 10:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Mystic Rose, your words mean a lot to me, to know that my feelings here are deeply understood, that brings a lump to my throat... thank you so much. Big hugs <3
  1. Date: 10/28/2013 4:50:00 AM

    this s wonderful I am not a fan of free verse but this is terrific Becca xx

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 10/28/2013 10:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Aw, thank you Mandy! You're not a fan of free verse but you think my poem is terrific, that is even more of an honor for me to know! :) It's so nice to see you again btw, and hope you're doing much better! xox
  1. Date: 10/28/2013 3:37:00 AM

    A beautiful, touching poem...

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 10/28/2013 10:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Bindu :)
  1. Date: 10/27/2013 9:49:00 PM

    How could he not? Such a lovely poem Becca....lovely...sniff...

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 10/28/2013 12:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    awww, thank you Donna lol, you're so sweet :)
  1. Date: 10/27/2013 8:03:00 PM

    A beautiful and enlightening write here my friend! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this excellent poem this evening! What a tremendous piece, such a delightful poem, Great Work!!

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 10/28/2013 12:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you very much for your kind words, Russell :)
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