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  1. Date: 12/5/2013 6:29:00 PM
    Becca Becca Becca... What do I Give to a lady who writes like you do? Hmmmmmm.........ADMIRATION!

  1. Date: 11/17/2013 2:29:00 AM
    The ending says it all beautiful

  1. Date: 11/1/2013 3:34:00 PM
    well penned Becca....best wishes

  1. Date: 10/31/2013 1:28:00 PM
    Id love to go back to the good times you just have to find or make new ones love your write as always full of emotion thanks for coments on mine hope you well too xx davidscott

  1. Date: 10/30/2013 9:34:00 PM
    Hey Becca, This is a wonderful poem! You certainly took me back.

  1. Date: 10/30/2013 12:37:00 PM
    We all wish for those carefree days of our youth....but it's never to late to start new dreams. Heartfelt write Becca! Hugs

  1. Date: 10/30/2013 10:59:00 AM
    Impressive write. One of passion and yearning. Good job

  1. Date: 10/29/2013 10:25:00 PM
    Becca, this touched me deeply. I especially like "and breezes would become gusts of years gone by." I treasure similar memories, but it's never quite enough. Mark

  1. Date: 10/29/2013 1:55:00 PM
    Hi! my lovely friend, you are going back to touch the sweet memories of the past, beautifully adorned the sweet feeling with nice words. Lovely done. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 10/29/2013 12:23:00 PM
    Breezy years,carefree days and you are floating in each lines.This is so good to read your sad and emotions ... liked it

  1. Date: 10/29/2013 10:48:00 AM
    All the waaaaay Exquisite!!!!!!

  1. Date: 10/29/2013 9:44:00 AM
    Stunning and beautifully written. Your references to the breezy and carefree feelings mixed with pangs of loss. Favorite line of many " And breezes would become gusts of years gone by". Amazing

  1. Date: 10/29/2013 8:37:00 AM
    Oh Yeah !! Can identify with this one after 28 years of marriage-- great depiction of how we so easily lose the fundamental passion we initially share with our partners. Beautiful read.

  1. Date: 10/29/2013 6:38:00 AM
    a heart felt cry Becca everyday life can take of the shine. Yet a little care puts it back great write ty for visiting my page Shadow x smile

  1. Date: 10/28/2013 10:20:00 PM
    It's a heart touching write Becca, where melting words of beautiful memories are coming from the depths of your heart. These memories of love are always precious and you have painted them beautifully in this sweet write and thank you for your kind words on my Song. Love and best wishes always..Ravindra K Kapoor

  1. Date: 10/28/2013 10:17:00 PM
    It's a heart touching write Becca, where melting words of beautiful memories are coming from the depths of your heart. These memories of love are always precious and you have painted them beautifully in this sweet write and thank you for your kind words on my Song. Love and best wishes always..Ravindra K Kapoor

  1. Date: 10/28/2013 7:40:00 PM
    You have such a tender heart, my dear sweet Rebecca! Trust me it CAN be recaptured dear friend! It takes two hearts beating in unison and the knowledge and the acceptance that the years go by but real true love remains! A memorable write dear friend! Miss Wattle has discovered what I've known for a while! BTW She is an absolute sweetheart as well with the same beauty inside! Love ya... xoxoxoxox

  1. Date: 10/28/2013 7:07:00 PM
    Becca, you have become one of my favourite poets in the short time since I joined P-Soup. I am enthralled by your style as you write so eloquently of love. I find myself sighing as I read each stanza of your work. This piece is no exception. It is beautiful and flows exceptionally well. I love the free verse style. //MW

  1. Date: 10/28/2013 6:57:00 PM
    What wonderful thoughts to return to days when dreams did not seem so impossible. This poem brings those dreams back into focus! I hope you and your husband reach those distant shores and celebrate still being together. a relationship that survives over decades is far from ordinary. the fact you are together means a dream continues to come true!

  1. Date: 10/28/2013 3:18:00 PM
    I love the sincerity and honesty coming from these words. I can almost see the expression on your face. I also want to point out the creative use of five lines in each stanza. It kind of gives you more options in choosing which words to rhyme. You didn't necessarily follow a rhyme pattern, you just did want you want and I love that. It worked brilliantly. Excellent job Becca.

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