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Lazy Man

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Lazy Man

This great escape, though I'm half awake, 
Feels so real I know it's fake!
Sweet, rich smoke, and I'm so relaxed-
(How much more can I take?) 
My evaluation, it could be wrong 
By trumpet, horn, or hit of bong; 
Lazy Man just in a daze- 
(Love me fast, or leave me long!)

*Very old "stoner" poem lol

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  1. Date: 11/1/2013 11:45:00 PM
    Ah apathy...

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet
    Date: 11/2/2013 8:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    There is a sense of apathy that I wasn't even aware of; thanks for brining that to light, Scott, and thanks for reading :)
  1. Date: 10/28/2013 3:22:00 PM
    lol. Nice one, Tap. Fer yeers bin doin nowt but binge // livvin life undir de freenge // cer not a bhean of wot’s not seen // im hepie wen me wirl is ghreen.

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet
    Date: 10/29/2013 9:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Love your creative replies, D; thanks for the read :)