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A Fly Flew By

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A Fly Flew By

Dimly lit end of day
Firstly sit begin to pray
Close my eyes cannot see
Want my mind to be free
But she, this flea, will not let me be
A game she wants to play
I want her to go away 
She’s driving me insane flying round my mane
Let the game begin this one she’ll not win
Nearly forgot her now I try to swat her
Buzzing… where… oh there, no there
I am made to swear and do not know why I care 
I shout and scream
Get out!  I don’t want you in my dream
I’m captivated with her zigzag swagger
And stagger each time I try to tag her
You’ll have no more fun and never again see the sun
Another has the gun and he won’t quit until you’re done
Little nagger he’s smashed your skull
No more dagger, found my peaceful lull
Tick-tock time for bed
Amen the fly is dead.
	  ~Blake Krystian Rohr

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  1. Date: 11/7/2013 10:17:00 AM

    This is why that Blue Neon fly/mosquito light attractor & I are best friends. No swatter here. I just make some popcorn and embracing the "kkkrrr" sound on my front porch. =) This was a very fun read!

    Rohr Avatar Blake Krystian Rohr Date: 11/7/2013 11:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Funny. Thank you.
  1. Date: 11/2/2013 6:27:00 PM

    Got company here; hate that creature. This one's on me. Thanks for the write. Sherese

    Rohr Avatar Blake Krystian Rohr Date: 11/6/2013 6:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Sorry he bothered you too! Thanks for your comment.
  1. Date: 10/31/2013 3:27:00 AM

    Hmmmmmm....love your write.....awesome. Nice to have u around. Bob- Based On Belief.

    Rohr Avatar Blake Krystian Rohr Date: 11/6/2013 6:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Love, that is strong. Thank you for a great welcome.
  1. Date: 10/30/2013 4:23:00 PM

    First of all a very well written and very amusing poem! :) and second welcome to PoetrySoup! you will make a great asset to the Soup! Welcome and have a great day... remember want comments, comment on others and make friends! :) xoxo from your new friend Chris! The Blue Poet

    Rohr Avatar Blake Krystian Rohr Date: 11/6/2013 6:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you! I am fond of both praise and encouragement.
  1. Date: 10/30/2013 4:15:00 PM

    Hilarious and absolutely captivating... Wecome to Poetry Soup, Blake! - Tim

    Rohr Avatar Blake Krystian Rohr Date: 11/6/2013 6:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you. Nice to know we share a sense of humor!