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Tanka 10

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Tanka 10

	
	
	
	Tanka 10
	
	
	richly colored kiss...
	hair-wisp falling on your face
	in twilight half-light 
	the moment I first knew you
	the moment you first knew me
	
	
	
	
	
	

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  1. Date: 11/3/2013 10:08:00 AM
    allow me to swoon, jack... how affectionate this is..:) huggs

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 11/7/2013 9:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    You're allowed...
  1. Date: 11/2/2013 7:23:00 PM
    You are great at expressing these moments Jack...

  1. Date: 11/1/2013 1:00:00 AM
    fanTAStic. What a great tanka.

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 11/1/2013 10:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, as always... Jack
  1. Date: 10/31/2013 2:27:00 AM
    Lovely, what a moment, so nicely captured.

  1. Date: 10/26/2013 1:12:00 PM
    Jack, your poem is beautiful and loving.. the moment love meets.. always..LINDA

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 10/26/2013 4:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, Linda, for the compliment... Jack
  1. Date: 10/26/2013 11:43:00 AM
    - Truth and romance.... lovely Tanka, Jack ! - - I wish you a nice weekend ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 10/26/2013 12:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, and a fun weekend to you as well... Jack