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  1. Date: 10/27/2013 8:50:00 AM

    When you live together and seperate there is nothing more lonely. I am so happy I left that island years ago.

  1. Date: 10/26/2013 8:24:00 AM

    Loneliness increases when you can't connect with the person you are with. Well done.

  1. Date: 10/26/2013 6:13:00 AM

    enjoyed the wit and humor, vie

  1. Date: 10/25/2013 10:41:00 PM

    falling out of love can be a hard thing to see sometimes. You nailed this senryu MR =)

  1. Date: 10/25/2013 9:46:00 PM

    This is an outstanding write my friend! You have amazed me by the splendor of this wondrous poem this evening! I really enjoyed feeling your expression you presented here within this piece Rose! What a delightful poem, Great Work!! PS did you mean to center the poem and add breaks like you did or did PoetrySoup do that to you? It did that to me as well, I had to go back and change it again. If you didn't want it too look like that, just go back and change it and post the update, it'll work then!