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Eve's beauty walks

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Eve's beauty walks


Amid the fields of Paradise, Eve walks to guise,
cause sightly shapes, adorned by blossoms to entice,
and gracefully her fingertips, but still unwise,
caress the apple 'mong the leaves; she lifts her eyes..

..she lifts her eyes to flash and stare inside his mind
deep in his eyes she fires his soul, she burns his soul;
she tastes a bite, in dreamy dance to wave and grind,
becomes his goal and laughingly, a burning coal.

With rushing blood, approaches he, her silken lips
his onset streams and fortitude tastes moaning sips,
beatitude and rustling brook - the drops of rain
amazing truth reveals salvation while she strips!
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Amid the fields of Paradise, Eve walks to guise,
cause sightly shapes, adorned by blossoms to entice,
and gracefully her fingertips, but still unwise,
caress the apple 'mong the leaves; she lifts her eyes..
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..the serpent whipped, biramous flung, fast lashing tongue, 
elastic coil, he slid amidst the leaves of dew; 
transformed their kiss to venom bite that painful stung,
it was the sinners' time when both the Gates passed through.

© G.V. 10-26-2013, All Rights Reserved
(Iambic Hexameter)

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  1. Date: 1/4/2014 1:25:00 PM

    Now I know and can feel what you meant back then... the emily effect! Esai kali poiitis!

  1. Date: 12/3/2013 1:30:00 PM

    HI Giorgio: A beautiful erotic story of a the first lady in guise (nude) enticed by an apple. Bravo. Thanks for your comment on my poem Dulcinea. I did not attempt to steal Don Quixote's thunder; it was a poem to my wife of devotion.

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V. Date: 12/3/2013 1:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Ralph, I already know that. I admire Cervantes and his hero, as well. And Don Quixote has been used as a metaphor by many poets so far. And I, for one, know a good metaphor when I see it. Thank you for your kind comment. G.
  1. Date: 11/19/2013 12:14:00 AM

    wow, this is fantastic. And erotic in parts too!! Congrats to you.

  1. Date: 11/18/2013 6:14:00 PM

    Beautiful....much congratulations

  1. Date: 11/16/2013 7:46:00 PM

    Enjoyed another fine masterpiece. Captivating ! Congrats on the win :)

  1. Date: 11/16/2013 6:42:00 PM

    Desire-filled poem about the first sin in the garden of Eden. Congrats, Giorgio!

  1. Date: 11/16/2013 10:11:00 AM

    I really like this....It reminds me Christina Rossetti's - Goblin Market...... Tony

  1. Date: 11/16/2013 8:29:00 AM

    BAM! Giorgio...Once again, you've outdone yourself. Truly, I've ready very few hexameters, and liked even less of them. Appaently they must have done something wrong, because your's is masterful. Grats on a perfect win. CTB

  1. Date: 11/16/2013 7:53:00 AM

    lovely, congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 11/16/2013 7:47:00 AM

    Nice poem Giorgio, Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 11/16/2013 6:39:00 AM

    Well-crafted and awesome..thnx for your visit and a big congrats to you on the top win, my friend!!

  1. Date: 11/15/2013 7:37:00 PM

    Giorgio---Another 7/7 from me to you for such an outstanding poem....very creative and seductive verse....many congrats on your remarkable win in the contest! I would think from what I read from you so far, you should have a poetry book published by now...am I right? Julie :-)

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V. Date: 11/15/2013 11:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes, you are More than one. :).
  1. Date: 11/15/2013 5:55:00 PM

    Awesome win, Giorgio. Congratulations to you on this beauty.

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V. Date: 11/16/2013 4:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, Andrea.
  1. Date: 11/15/2013 4:54:00 PM

    I was very taken with this poem - some beautiful phrasing, I particularly liked the line "becomes his goal and laughingly, a burning coal"; the poem is very classical and yet it has a modern edge - congrats on your win in my contest! :)

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V. Date: 11/16/2013 4:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Charlotte: Thank you for bestowing high honors on me, in your contest,. Giorgio
  1. Date: 11/3/2013 7:48:00 AM

    G, an unusual take for the contest... creatrive and wonderfully flowing in ede..:) huggs

  1. Date: 10/31/2013 2:12:00 AM

    excellent write... apple picking time in heaven

  1. Date: 10/28/2013 4:32:00 AM

    Stunning work, I marvel at your creativity!!!777s

  1. Date: 10/27/2013 5:32:00 PM

    Wonderful words from a truly great poet. Your writing so often astounds me. thanks for the read Giorgio....Peter

  1. Date: 10/27/2013 5:25:00 PM

    wonderful poetry, love the form, which you complement with awesome words...

  1. Date: 10/26/2013 8:07:00 PM

    you used a a creative handle to depict your message, G... well done, word-weaver!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 10/26/2013 7:16:00 PM

    this is by far my favorite for the contest... love the story told, the use of images and everything about this one...excellent poem Giorgio :)

  1. Date: 10/25/2013 5:32:00 PM

    Giorgio, not often am I stumped for a comment. Geez, how to respond to such finesse? Your poem is nothing short of elegant. You've described this biblical scene as only befitting a poet of your caliber. Off to faves to read over and over again. Licia :-)

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V. Date: 10/25/2013 6:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Licia!
  1. Date: 10/25/2013 4:51:00 PM

    A unique and clever take on the "apple pickin' time" theme. A very beautiful and sensual poem about temptation. Fantastic work, Giorgio! I wish you the best of luck in the contest!

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V. Date: 10/25/2013 6:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Kelly!
  1. Date: 10/25/2013 4:14:00 PM

    This is ardently beautiful.An effervescent journey and wise concept re apple picking.Enticing and with a passionate flow.Wowzer!!!

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V. Date: 10/25/2013 6:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Charm!