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Apple Pickin' Time

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Apple Pickin' Time

Me and Sweetie pickin’ apples -
Ones for making pies we find.
While my Sweetie climbs the ladder,
I stand watching from behind.

In his levis he’s a cutie,
plucking apples from the tree.
Meanwhile, I admire his booty
since he’s faced away from me!

Apple pickin’ time is nice,
but what we’ve gathered will suffice.
Me and Sweetie think alike -
We need to add a little spice!

Me and Sweetie pickin’ apples -
Ones for making pies we find.
While my Sweetie climbs the ladder,
I stand watching from behind.

Underneath this autumn sun
I’m so glad I have my guy.
Apple pickin’ time is done.
I’m ready for my sweetie pie!

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  1. Date: 3/1/2014 2:00:00 PM
    Andrea Such a cute and creative write. A sweet guy and sweet pie. Perfect combination. LOL Thanks for the great comment on my Taming A Heart poem.

  1. Date: 12/4/2013 7:34:00 PM
    Nothing nicer than watching booty and eating apple pie. Cute one. love phyl

  1. Date: 11/12/2013 5:42:00 PM
    Congrats on your winning entry..Way to go..Sara

  1. Date: 11/11/2013 10:03:00 PM
    Andrea this is so cute! I really like it! This is going in my favs. Congrats on your well deserved 1st place win! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 11/11/2013 7:19:00 PM
    # 1 Again Congrats!! Myself..I seem to be the king of HM ,,,,,,Rick

  1. Date: 11/11/2013 10:08:00 AM
    Adorable AD! Sexy apple pickin'--who knew!

  1. Date: 11/10/2013 7:52:00 AM
    Love the poem, especially how the ending wraps things up so natural and so perfect!

  1. Date: 11/9/2013 8:37:00 PM
    Here's a Congratulatory apple for the teacher lol, knew this would be at the top Petal. Take care, Richard

  1. Date: 11/9/2013 5:22:00 PM
    Andrea, Awesome Apple Pickin' Time Win................ SKAT ~ LOVE

  1. Date: 11/9/2013 11:38:00 AM
    Very clever with adorable visuals. Watching your sweetie pie's booty while he climbs the ladder to pick apples. Love the sweetness of this one. Congrats on your win

  1. Date: 11/9/2013 11:03:00 AM
    Really cute! Some day you'll run across it and wonder why you kept changing the rhyme. I have been gone for a few days and am having to get back into it. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 11/9/2013 8:37:00 AM
    loved this one the first time I read it...congrats on your win :) hugs

  1. Date: 11/9/2013 7:51:00 AM
    Very beautiful poem. Congratulations on your grand win friend Andrea ;) Cheers!!

  1. Date: 11/9/2013 3:46:00 AM
    Congrats on the win , Andrea

  1. Date: 10/31/2013 4:08:00 PM
    Heaven on an autumn day is what you've sweetly written. Bring along your lovely pet and she'd be a prrrfect kitten. Wow, did I just write that. :)

  1. Date: 10/29/2013 9:48:00 PM
    This is so cute Andrea....slips off the tongue like icecream, sweet and creamy! Loved it! How do you do it? Every one of your entries is so special, I am lucky to crack out one!

  1. Date: 10/29/2013 4:35:00 PM
    Set this one to music. I can feel the air, smell the apples. LOve, daver

  1. Date: 10/28/2013 9:18:00 PM
    Wow! Sweetie pie ...... This such a simple and sweet rhyme.Bring charm in reading.Loved it

  1. Date: 10/28/2013 8:35:00 PM
    Seems you picked the right words for this whilst out in the orchard Petal, and I do believe the last line is the very core of this poem lol. Take care, Richard

  1. Date: 10/28/2013 5:38:00 PM
    Apple pie and cute booty...gotta be a winner Andrea.

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