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HANNABELLE

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Below is the poem entitled HANNABELLE which was written by poet Denise Hopkins. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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HANNABELLE

written 22nd March 2001


H  is for the many "hearts you will break
A  is for the "appreciation you feel for love
N  is for the "never endless laughs we'll have
N  is for the loving "nature that radiates from you
A  is for "all the happiness you bring to my life
B  is for your "bubbly smiles
E  is for our "endless memories
L  is for all the "love you give
L  is for a "lifetime we have together
E  is for the "eternal freedom I give to you


         "Mummy's Thought's"

           So bubbly and bright
        You alway's have to be right
        Compassionate and sweet
          To everyone you meet 
           But never comparing
  To the mum, you are forever sharing

                                          with love

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  1. Date: 10/30/2013 10:09:00 PM
    Eternal freedom is most enjoyable for me...Beautiful acrostic for children.Great job

    Hopkins Avatar Denise Hopkins
    Date: 11/7/2013 3:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you for commenting. I am still growing as a poet so any advice is welcome misspelled words very common I do ask please tell me the word misspelled it is hard to correct a word when you have no idea which 1 it is. please enjoy some of my other work I seem to write all kinds
  1. Date: 10/30/2013 9:55:00 AM
    Great tribute to your child..Enjoyed reading this one..Sara

    Hopkins Avatar Denise Hopkins
    Date: 11/7/2013 3:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you please enjoy the rest of my work and comments and advice are more than welcome as advice is the only thing maturing my poems. spelling is and has improved. please let me know misspellings and the word please thank you and enjoy
  1. Date: 10/29/2013 2:15:00 AM
    A very sweet poem Denise, I would have given you a 7 but for the misspelt word Brake (Break), the brake you spelt was referring to car brakes, the poem is wonderful and don't be put off by my nit picking, you are doing really well here I will read some more of your work. John

    Hopkins Avatar Denise Hopkins
    Date: 11/7/2013 3:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    cheers
  1. Date: 10/25/2013 5:29:00 AM
    Nice tribute you have paid, Denise

    Hopkins Avatar Denise Hopkins
    Date: 11/7/2013 3:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you. I'm still maturing as a poet but I am getting there please enjoy some of my other poems. and I really do ask for advice. if I misspell words please let me know and which word it is thank you for your comment