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BEFORE THE GATE

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Below is the poem entitled BEFORE THE GATE which was written by poet bl devnath. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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BEFORE THE GATE

                                          intelligence over the innocence
                                       with dishonesty plays game of gain
                                         where the present world is going
                                              is it not that is of the hell?

                                       with the selfish mantras of cheating  
                                             earning future hardest biff
                                         If words of Jesus is not obeyed
                                 before the afar gate all such will be punished

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  1. Date: 10/25/2013 10:30:00 AM

    Very true, my dear....Lovely write...He is willing to foegive if we but ask.....

    devnath Avatar bl devnath Date: 10/25/2013 12:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes, lovely comment. Loved always, bl
  1. Date: 10/25/2013 10:29:00 AM

    wow! such a provoking thought. I wish to be free from all my sins before i arrive... enjoyed..SKAT

    devnath Avatar bl devnath Date: 10/25/2013 12:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    A lot of thanks always............. Loved always, bl
  1. Date: 10/24/2013 5:46:00 PM

    Jesus is living and ready to forgive all who come to him. What an amazing God we have, the guilty declared innocent.

    devnath Avatar bl devnath Date: 10/25/2013 7:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for reading my write and for your comment, my poet friend. Loved always, bl
  1. Date: 10/24/2013 3:05:00 PM

    Got that one correct..Enjoyed reading your faith based work..Your comments 'pon my work are appreciated..Sara

    devnath Avatar bl devnath Date: 10/24/2013 3:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Huge thanks for your comment, my lovely friend. Loved always, bl