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AWAITING DAWN

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AWAITING DAWN



twilight gentle, inky moaning, seeking, caressing ambrosia, prurience; mantra, lace mystifying,unbuttoning...deepening pastel, awaiting dawn
Diamante Form Contest by nette onclaud

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  1. Date: 11/20/2013 7:45:00 PM

    this is real nice nette... PD

  1. Date: 11/16/2013 5:32:00 PM

    Congrats on your beautiful win, nette! :) G.

  1. Date: 11/16/2013 2:27:00 PM

    Nette, lovely passionate poem, congratulations on your win.

  1. Date: 11/16/2013 2:20:00 PM

    Congrats on your winning work..Sara

  1. Date: 11/16/2013 1:39:00 AM

    Wow!! Congratulationa on this winning poem of yours friend Nette :) ;) an excellent piece indeed!! Cheers!

  1. Date: 11/15/2013 2:15:00 PM

    ....so this is how it's done. : ) Great imagery. Congrats, Nette!

  1. Date: 11/14/2013 11:28:00 PM

    wowowow, I can see why THIS is at the top!! Congrats, NETTE

  1. Date: 11/14/2013 7:29:00 PM

    I loved this one when I first read it...worth reading again,,,congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 11/14/2013 2:21:00 PM

    I so love the transition ......some fantastic descriptive words !! Well done !!

  1. Date: 11/14/2013 1:39:00 PM

    Another lovely win, Nette! Congrats your first place in the contest! Reading this diamante before, I had a feeling it would win! Remarkable job, Julie :-)

  1. Date: 11/14/2013 9:34:00 AM

    Congrats on your superb win, my friend. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 11/14/2013 4:53:00 AM

    many congratulations nette xx

  1. Date: 11/14/2013 4:43:00 AM

    Lovely and sensual. Bravo nette! :) G.

  1. Date: 11/13/2013 11:51:00 PM

    Congratulation and i rally like the words you have chosen:)

  1. Date: 11/13/2013 10:06:00 PM

    Nette. Great piece. Grats on your win! CTB

  1. Date: 11/13/2013 9:56:00 PM

    Congrats on the win in my contest and thanks for participating, nette

  1. Date: 11/3/2013 12:33:00 PM

    Twilight to Dawn and all the sensual romance in between. Captivating....... SuZ

  1. Date: 10/29/2013 1:02:00 PM

    Excellent diamante and all the best in the contest! You did it again, Nette and I think you will do well in the contest! Julie :-)

  1. Date: 10/28/2013 4:42:00 AM

    You caught the heady mix perfectly - mantra, lace, mystifying... Lovely!

  1. Date: 10/27/2013 6:54:00 PM

    gorgeous diamante Nette....hugs :)

  1. Date: 10/27/2013 4:03:00 PM

    unbuttoning... hmm.... very nice!! :) G.

  1. Date: 10/26/2013 1:14:00 PM

    WoW!!Great Diamante by you here Nette...mystifying...and a little bit sec c :)

  1. Date: 10/26/2013 9:03:00 AM

    It's jaw-dropping how you made a Diamante THIS gorgeous.

  1. Date: 10/25/2013 4:39:00 PM

    Very nicely written Nette, I love awaiting the dawn, it is a very special time of the day....Peter

  1. Date: 10/25/2013 3:38:00 PM

    Very cool! I love waiting for dawn while enjoying twilight. You put my feelings into words. I also liked the clever positioning of the words "twilight and dawn". Just great Nette!

  1. Date: 10/25/2013 3:36:00 PM

    Very cool! I love waiting for dawn while enjoying twilight. You put my feelings into words. I also liked the clever positioning of the words "twilight and dawn". Just great Nette!

  1. Date: 10/25/2013 12:19:00 AM

    I love all your verses but when you get romantic..Its exceptional..I love this dazzling soft silk beauty between twilight and dawn .This goes to my fvs..Charma

  1. Date: 10/24/2013 9:30:00 PM

    Without argument, this brief handiwork mirrors the range and depth of your vision! An honor to have read you.

  1. Date: 10/24/2013 4:23:00 PM

    A very marvelous and captivating words in imagery. Lovely poem from a master poetess. Winning wishes luv. Hugs and love, Gail

  1. Date: 10/24/2013 3:10:00 PM

    The build up to this is lushly intense.The images are so vivid. I really like the entire verse.Perhaps I ramble,since I find your talent unequal to mine. With respect.

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