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  1. Date: 10/26/2013 5:44:00 PM
    Hi Jancarl, dropped by to say hello and see if you had any new poems. I hope you are enjoying your weekend. I enjoyed giving this one another read.

  1. Date: 10/24/2013 10:24:00 AM
    lonely and scared good write Shadow x smile

  1. Date: 10/24/2013 7:38:00 AM
    This kinda freaked me out. I like poetry that causes a visceral reaction. Outstanding work.

  1. Date: 10/23/2013 7:53:00 PM
    this one is gripping... Gave me a little small imagery from the Tale Tale Heart." from Mr Poe.... love this one.... I once lived in a house and felt haunted every night. awesome....LINDA

  1. Date: 10/23/2013 5:37:00 PM
    interesting write Jancarl, sorry about the haunting. Skat

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  1. Date: 10/23/2013 11:51:00 AM
    - It's from the world of spirits ..... If you do not feel discomfort, it is a "kind" spirit ..... - Quite naturally, do not be afraid !!! - Well written, and thank you for visiting my poem ... appreciate your words. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/23/2013 11:43:00 AM
    Hi Jancarl, A fascinating psychological write for sure concerning auditory hallucinations..Thanks for visiting my work as well.. Ken

  1. Date: 10/23/2013 11:38:00 AM
    A very interesting write, Jancarl! Glad I stopped by! Love, Kim