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MISTY MORNING

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Below is the poem entitled MISTY MORNING which was written by poet Monterey Sirak. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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MISTY MORNING

Misty morning    hovering
where cool of the night
meets budding warmth of dawn

Glistening drops of dew
beading on early fall grasses
dripping from swaying cattails

Damp tendrils gently
brushing an upturned cheek
Obscuring    for a moment 
the vision of newly opened eyes

Lacy    peek-a-boo veil
blunting stark reality waiting beyond

Wispy    fragile mist
enveloping in peaceful silence
Encouraging quiet contemplation

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  1. Date: 3/21/2014 8:44:00 AM
    Monterey What a serene and relaxing write. A feeling of quietness and wonder. Thanks for the great comment on my Single Mom poem.

    Sirak Avatar Monterey Sirak
    Date: 3/22/2014 6:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Robin
  1. Date: 3/5/2014 7:46:00 AM
    Homely feeling while reading your imagism. Dutch greetings Elly

    Sirak Avatar Monterey Sirak
    Date: 3/9/2014 4:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Ellie, good to see you
  1. Date: 12/2/2013 1:06:00 AM
    Dawn so fresh and inviting.... Such a beautiful description and mood you have re-created. My favorite time of day. SuZ

  1. Date: 10/25/2013 5:54:00 PM
    a lovely vision portrayed Monterey very fine pen Shadow x smile

  1. Date: 10/25/2013 8:34:00 AM
    - Feel a warm glow over your beautiful poem Monterey !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/24/2013 8:41:00 AM
    Good morning Monterey.

  1. Date: 10/24/2013 1:21:00 AM
    Beautiful, beautiful... I love the way you have ended the whole misty, dewy beauty in quiet contemplation.. excellent work.

  1. Date: 10/23/2013 9:29:00 PM
    it's very MISTY. really, you quite set the tone of that word!!!

  1. Date: 10/23/2013 9:25:00 PM
    Relaxing write with just the hint of mystery in it's words. Thank you for your calming write. Also for your wonderful words and comment on my Beatles write.

  1. Date: 10/23/2013 4:44:00 PM
    A wonderful image of nature you have painted her, This really brought harmony to me as I read...Peter

  1. Date: 10/23/2013 12:49:00 PM
    Nature in all its beauty penned here. I just have to sigh...............Lovely hon As Always, Shar

  1. Date: 10/23/2013 9:46:00 AM
    Ahhhhhh I feel refreshed. Beautiful!

  1. Date: 10/23/2013 9:12:00 AM
    I enjoyed the poem with mist feelings, Monterey

  1. Date: 10/23/2013 9:00:00 AM
    Allowing the silence to break the mind free from its "fog", if you will. I quite enjoyed the setting you created here. Excellent!