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Exercising My Demons

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Exercising My Demons

With my Angels exorcised-
I Exercise my Devils
Daren't you guess what this implies?
In Evil doth I revel!

Shout and swear; curse and cuss
In the Bowels of Tartarus!
Sweet Lucifer! I do concur-
Heaven- it's just not for us!


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  1. Date: 10/26/2013 7:24:00 AM
    I think exercising our demons keeps us in line....got to have fun in life sometimes but need to keep site of that fine line...nice write

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    Date: 10/26/2013 7:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for stopping by and for the review, Sandra; I very much appreciate it. And thanks for the compliment :)
  1. Date: 10/25/2013 9:02:00 PM
    Great energy, Chan! Nice!

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    Date: 10/26/2013 6:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, Jimbo; much appreciated :)
  1. Date: 10/25/2013 5:28:00 PM
    Love your wit! Enjoyed this one :)

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    Date: 10/26/2013 6:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    My sincerest thanks, Miss Wattle :) (sorry for the typos when I wrote your name on earlier comments; "Wattie's" is my favorite brand of tomato sauce and I had it in mind when I wrote out your name. Sorry for that!) :)
  1. Date: 10/25/2013 3:18:00 PM
    Interesting title! We all need to let loose, and have a little fun, once in awhile! Terrific poem, I loved it!...Thank you very much for all of the wonderful comments. I truly appreciate it, BP! :)

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    Date: 10/26/2013 6:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks as always, SP. You know I'm one of your biggest fans <3
  1. Date: 10/25/2013 6:20:00 AM
    This is very serious pun! Catchy title. You're so creative. You made my day. Friend, JM

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    Date: 10/25/2013 7:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, JM; you just made my morning! :)
  1. Date: 10/24/2013 10:38:00 PM
    hope you are not serious, but I sure do like your poem. I was hoping you had not done a typo in your poem's title. And as soon as I read the first two lines, I realized you were just playing on words and I really liked that unique element of your poem!

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    Date: 10/25/2013 5:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    lol No, of course not, Andrea; it was one of my silly musings. I don't believe in the Devil at all. I was hoping the title might entice more people to read, especially since it did seem like I made a grammatical error lol. Thanks for stopping by and for the review and reply :)
  1. Date: 10/24/2013 9:56:00 AM
    Chan Do I need to perform an exorcism on you. LOL This is very powerful and deep. Dark and intense. Good job Hugs

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    Date: 10/24/2013 10:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, sweet pea ;) I have this love/hate relationship with religion, and I like to muse about the Devil, even though I don't even believe in him. I love the Lord, and enjoy playing with religion-inspired musings. Thanks for reading, hon <3
  1. Date: 10/24/2013 9:49:00 AM
    I sincerely hope this never becomes your reality. You are formed to walk in heavenly places.

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    Date: 10/24/2013 10:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    No, of course not, my friend. I love the Lord; I just enjoy, as I told Robin, to muse over the Devil, despite the fact that I do not even believe he or hell exists. Thanks for stopping by, Richard :)
  1. Date: 10/24/2013 9:12:00 AM
    hmmmm... I doth think I need to find some holy water! lol Just kidding; you did this one Arc! You have to sit and think when you read it.

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    Date: 10/24/2013 9:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    lol Thanks, FJ; I appreciate the review! :)
  1. Date: 10/24/2013 6:53:00 AM
    A very powerful write, loved it!

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    Date: 10/24/2013 9:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for the read, reply and compliment, Bindu! :)
  1. Date: 10/23/2013 12:56:00 PM
    Enjoyed this one....makes you think! A small poem that sends a powerful message! Julie :-)

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    Date: 10/23/2013 12:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks so much for the read and review, Julie; much appreciated :)
  1. Date: 10/23/2013 6:53:00 AM
    - Power in a short poem, well done ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

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    Date: 10/23/2013 7:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks as always, Anne Lise! :)