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Below is the poem entitled unfinished which was written by poet Morgan Tate. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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i’m lost.

wandering my mind, hollow now.

secrets tucked in the seams, invisible to passer-bys.

each step leaves an imprint behind,

dust settling into the crevices left by my toes.

the world empty,

immune to stolen glances between souls and half-hearted exchanges.

peace swept away,

pushed to the side by an old broom of straw and wood.

oxygen dissipates,

I try hard,

harder to breathe.

but all that is left to soothe my lungs

is the empty, grey air,

void of the warmth of shared space
.

sometimes I sneak away

to send a fluid rush to my veins,

entrancing my mind in a fictional fantasy.

alone, I bathe in my secrecy,

cleansing my skin with vibrant truths.

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  1. Date: 11/2/2013 11:20:00 PM
    Morgan, .:-) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the HOME PAGE.... always~ LINDA

  1. Date: 10/28/2013 11:25:00 PM
    a beautiful poem.

  1. Date: 10/23/2013 11:32:00 AM
    morgan - Desperation and short-lived relief run through your poetry like a marathoner. I cannot possibly name all the driving lines you create. Your use of language is incredible. Welcome here. You are now on my favorites list. Kathy

  1. Date: 10/23/2013 3:26:00 AM
    - Welcome to P-Soup, Morgan ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/23/2013 12:42:00 AM
    Mogan, epic and deep. the expressions are epic! your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT

  1. Date: 10/23/2013 12:09:00 AM
    A very deep poem, such a good ending... Morgan, I like your first poetic piece on the site ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@