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Angel Hearts

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Below is the poem entitled Angel Hearts which was written by poet Debbie Duncan. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Angel Hearts

Angels lay their hearts across the sky.
Thing about that is, is there one for you?

What I'm saying is, you can pick anyone.
But is that the right one for you?

Who are they to say it's not for you.
Don't get me wrong, every heart should feel love.

I mean isn't that what it was created for ?
Every heart surely deserves love , don't they?

I'm just asking, do you know the right one ?
I know how it feels to have love dance around
 
your heart strings , then float away " poof" .
Just to let you know how it sometimes goes.

Who am I to tell you who to let pull on your heart strings.
I wonder is there a tender heart waiting out there for me.

As I see the angels lay their heart strings across the sky.
I reach for one  so I can fly . 



9/ 10/2012 Mon. 1:30pm

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  1. Date: 4/13/2014 3:55:00 AM
    Nice write up. Angels in disguise - blessing and uplifting. Take care, Bhavna

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 4/13/2014 8:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Bhavna :)
  1. Date: 3/30/2014 4:57:00 AM
    lovely! Wish i could be that angel.

  1. Date: 1/8/2014 7:29:00 AM
    Oh my lil' friend this is such a lovely write! I pray you find that angel to touch your heart with more love than ever possible !

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 1/8/2014 12:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I thank you for such a sweet post ;)
  1. Date: 12/24/2013 2:28:00 AM
    Deb, this is awesome... Linda

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 1/8/2014 12:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Linda ;)
  1. Date: 12/23/2013 1:25:00 AM
    seek and you will always find, the fella with the cute behind, and then? yep my sis smells cigarette smoke when Dad is about ... Recently my Cousin Margaret died, i had a vivid dream there she was a young blonde lady again ....and i could hear the welcome for her ... "The green green grass of home" down the road i looked and there came Mary, hair of gold and lips like cherrys, its good to touch the green green grass of home...Margaret Mary Brummell was home .....

  1. Date: 12/22/2013 7:01:00 PM
    You must have caught the angel because you soar with your poetry!! Your creative heart speaks beauty!! chuck

  1. Date: 12/2/2013 2:25:00 PM
    This is just beautiful, Debbie! I do believe that there is a soul mate out there for everyone. The hard part is finding them! A fantastic poem! I really enjoyed the read!...Thank you for the wonderful comments! I appreciate it very much! And, I am so glad that you enjoyed my collaboration with Linda, on "Atlantis"! :)

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 12/2/2013 3:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Kelly ;}
  1. Date: 11/7/2013 2:52:00 PM
    We get so tied to this ole earth that we don't look above. For as you say, that's where they are. The one's who can bring love. Peace. :)

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 11/7/2013 4:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Robert ;}
  1. Date: 11/4/2013 10:32:00 AM
    last two lines attract me so much and they are so true.Angel's hearts are floating and dancing in the sky...lovely view.

  1. Date: 10/29/2013 10:37:00 PM
    Made me smile with this poem. My husband and I are so opposite that you wonder how we ever got together. Love your thoughts on this delightful poem. love phyl

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 10/30/2013 12:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you phyl ;}
  1. Date: 10/27/2013 5:56:00 PM
    our bodies wear out time and again, but we return to the earthly plane, our lover friends return they do,, we meet again fore life is through, on this you can depend, magnetic attractions too, and pre-written is the when...... Don re: "Angel Hearts" Debbie Duncan

    JOHNSON Avatar DON JOHNSON
    Date: 11/26/2013 9:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yes the one will come if you ask for him, and keep a looking thick- n-thin, till the mystic ocean parts for you .... and here comes bugaloo...to grin....
    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 10/27/2013 6:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for coming to read yet again ;} good verse you penned in my comment box ;}
  1. Date: 10/27/2013 3:42:00 PM
    You have penned delightful descriptiveness here.

  1. Date: 10/27/2013 12:28:00 AM
    So lovely, reminds me the song "Can I have this dance" by Anne Murray

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 10/27/2013 1:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you arthur , I haven't heard that song for a while, though it was/ is a favorite song ;}
  1. Date: 10/25/2013 6:44:00 PM
    How very beautiful your poem is. I want to fly too. Maybe I'll join you. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 10/25/2013 10:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Lucilla ;}
  1. Date: 10/25/2013 1:10:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading your well-penned verse! Keep writing and I hope that "tender heart" finds you! Best of luck in life and with your poetry endeavors! Your Poetry Soup friend, Julie :-)

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 10/25/2013 10:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Julie ;}
  1. Date: 10/25/2013 12:21:00 PM
    Very pleasant reading your verse today. Light & Love

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 10/25/2013 11:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for coming by Debbie ;}
  1. Date: 10/25/2013 10:57:00 AM
    I just love the way you take this subject and deal with it. There is no accounting for chemistry. I have seen some very strange combinations. You have been very kind to leave wonderful comments for me. Your time and effort are very much appreciated. You are really quite sweet and tender. I am a happily married man, but if I were not, then ..........

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 10/25/2013 11:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hello Duke , I thank you for reading and always leaving nice comments ;}
  1. Date: 10/24/2013 7:15:00 PM
    Debbie, this is very beautiful. Hold on tight the flight seems never ending.... LOVE SKAT

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 10/25/2013 2:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for reading SKAT ;}
  1. Date: 10/24/2013 3:02:00 PM
    well, I still likes it!!!

  1. Date: 10/23/2013 9:05:00 PM
    this is precious, Debbie. Thanks for letting me know you posted this new poem and I hope it does well in the contest!

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 10/23/2013 11:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    This is not for contest ;}
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