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Spruce

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Spruce

Hands and wings melting
The love made by a finger and a blade
That feels every lash of your lips
Upon every turn of the page

Rolling across the frets are my phrases
Dissonant chords wailing beneath the spruce
Feelings strung and forgotten altogether
As the music tells them their tragic tale

Moons and the king behind the veils
A ring touched by the blackest heart
Sewn sentiments keep the city
Awake with the smell of blood

Breaths grew silent.
I could smell barley from the parcel.
Reversed for us, the cold truth
Made as such so we may learn

Smoke
I painted facets of you on the fogged glass
I remember those conversations
As vomit pretending to be warm soup

Hands and wings merging
The love between a feather and a blade
That feels the rush of your fingertips
As you distastefully turn every page

Details deemed unimportant remain unseen.
Even if the way you see me has, our story still won't change.


***Rock and Roll
***Jake Ponce
***GROOVE IT !
***October 22, 2013

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  1. Date: 10/30/2013 12:24:00 PM

    Hello Jake, , enjoyed your GROOVE IT win............. ~LOVE SKAT~

  1. Date: 10/29/2013 1:01:00 PM

    so proud of you, jake... the medicine man rakes in it.. congrats on your fine win in my contest; well deserved.. hope you got my soup mail!..:) encore!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 10/29/2013 10:02:00 AM

    Hi, everyone! I still can't believe that this piece made it. Thank you for always dropping by, I really appreciate your time and thoughts.

  1. Date: 10/29/2013 5:15:00 AM

    - Always enjoyable to read your poetry - Today I want to congratulate your winning poem Jake. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/28/2013 10:00:00 PM

    Jake. You rocked this one. Just read your poem with a guitar on my lap...feeling it, man. Grats! CTB

  1. Date: 10/28/2013 11:51:00 AM

    Jake, nicely done ... congratulations on your win...LINDA

  1. Date: 10/28/2013 7:44:00 AM

    Congrats on the win in the contest, Jack

  1. Date: 10/27/2013 9:02:00 PM

    Congrats, Jake! First place and that's briliant! You're such an awesome writer! Bless you! Love,love,love! :-) - Den

  1. Date: 10/27/2013 8:35:00 PM

    Deserving of a win, and nice job!

  1. Date: 10/27/2013 8:14:00 PM

    an amazing piece from your Jake...congrats on your first place win :)

  1. Date: 10/27/2013 4:04:00 PM

    Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 10/27/2013 12:03:00 PM

    Jake---Many congrats on your 1st place win in Nette's contest....I had a feeling it would win! Julie :-)

  1. Date: 10/27/2013 11:34:00 AM

    Jake, congrats on your rocking poem and nice win. G.

  1. Date: 10/26/2013 11:51:00 AM

    Jake This is one emotional and heartfelt poem. Gives the reader goosebumps when they read the story created by you. Nice job Thanks for great comment on my Closed Minded poem.

  1. Date: 10/23/2013 11:19:00 AM

    Splendid write Jake. your poetry clutch at the heartstrings. I can feel the emotions in every line as I read it. thank you.

    Ponce Avatar Jake Ponce Date: 10/26/2013 9:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you!
  1. Date: 10/23/2013 9:24:00 AM

    Great job on this one, Jake...impeccable imagery! Much enjoyed, Julie :-)

    Ponce Avatar Jake Ponce Date: 10/26/2013 9:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for always taking the time to read my work, Julie!
  1. Date: 10/23/2013 8:06:00 AM

    soup mail!

    Ponce Avatar Jake Ponce Date: 10/23/2013 11:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes, ma'am~ :)
  1. Date: 10/23/2013 4:18:00 AM

    whhooo, a bombardment of edgy images and what a study- in -contrast approach, jake... you slay me to bits with this poetic sting.. hope you can include this in my ongoing contest... filipinos are good; this reminds me of nick joaquin's lamentations..:) huggs