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Our Home

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Our Home

It states „our home“ the calendar
Fields unsown and lavender
I felt sadness as I were
Standing there
Part nightmare
I recall his deathbed then
With bloody sheets 
Next to my seat 
A sister weeps 
the night when his pain said now
Refuse to think and pull the scissors 
Remind me not of what lies in regret 
„had we more time“
I don't need that
And cut our home from calendar.

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  1. Date: 10/28/2013 12:34:00 PM
    your poem is what you make of it... PD

    Žilic Avatar Nikola Žilic
    Date: 10/28/2013 1:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    tautology is not your friend
  1. Date: 10/28/2013 10:38:00 AM
    Was my poem so bad that you gave me such a bad comment what was so wrong in in it please may i know?do reply fast........and tell me what is my mistake.