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I saw you yesterday

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I saw you yesterday

I saw you yesterday

I saw you yesterday, your features grinned,
some silken scarf was waving in the blue,
I thought of what the rains could not rescind;
our images, that in the fields imbue.

I saw tempestuous, around me shades,
the rain's persistence had engraved your name
upon the slate, around she formed cascades,
inviting flash amid the drops, and flame.

I saw flash yesterday, inside the rain,
how beautiful it was, her kiss of dew
your words became my sails on trip arcane 
the clouds, your messengers, 'mid skies to strew.

I sensed the crooked line reticulate,
the sulfur acrid smell and pale flame's hue,
transmuting to abderian road skate,
zigzagging on a water copper tube.

The flame transformed to runnel flowing laughs;
the rustling of droplets on the leaves,
combined the bright and shapely drawing graphs
with clouds to form above, celestial eaves.

I saw flash yesterday, my features grinned,
like silken scarf was waving in the blue,
I thought of what the rains could not rescind:
two images, amidst the fields imbue.

© G. V., 10-21-2013, All Rights Reserved
(Iambic pentameter)


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  1. Date: 2/20/2014 11:00:00 AM

    Thank you all, friends. :)

  1. Date: 12/10/2013 6:20:00 PM

    This poem is just beautiful, and it flows so effortlessly! I loved this poem the first time that I read it, and I believe that I faved it! Congratulations on your well deserved win, Giorgio!...Thank you very much for the kind congrats on my poem!

  1. Date: 12/10/2013 6:35:00 AM

    Nice win, Giorgio

  1. Date: 12/10/2013 4:08:00 AM

    Congrats on the win, Giorgio

  1. Date: 12/9/2013 9:54:00 PM

    A lovely write for a lovely lady....beautiful images you painted with your words. congrats on an excellent win! Hugs

  1. Date: 12/9/2013 6:44:00 PM

    Congrats, Giorgio! I love this poem.I had added it to my faves last time.

  1. Date: 12/3/2013 7:29:00 PM

    A beautiful dedication for an awesome mistress on soup. Big congrats on your outright victory.

  1. Date: 12/3/2013 3:01:00 PM

    Congrats on your win Giorgio this is a beautiful poem very well done

  1. Date: 12/1/2013 9:09:00 AM

    Conratulations on your win Giorgio, This was an exiting and well written poem. Your friend in poetry....Roger

  1. Date: 12/1/2013 3:11:00 AM

    This is not only an outstanding poem but an excellent and super lovely dedication to a very very dear friend and sis of OURS here at soup my very dear friend Giorgio. I love it so much as well. Going to my FAVE. TYSM for it & eeeverything! MY BIGGEST HEARTFELT CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR GOLDEN SHINING WIN! Happy weekend and 1st day of Dec! love lots always, Leonora

  1. Date: 11/30/2013 10:51:00 PM

    Beautiful lines and a lovely dedication to PD, Giorgio! Congrats to you on your first place win in her contest! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 11/30/2013 6:15:00 PM

    I love how you recalled the first stanza at the end. So beautiful and full of emotion. Congrats!

  1. Date: 11/30/2013 4:00:00 PM

    Excellent poetry Giorgio, and great tribute to a wonderful lady, congrats on your win, you have no competition, you're better than good, hugs xxx

  1. Date: 11/13/2013 9:40:00 PM

    Beautiful Giorgio :)

  1. Date: 10/29/2013 9:46:00 AM

    I really like the line "like silken scarf was waving in the blue"..Creative work penned..Enjoyed reading it today..Sara

  1. Date: 10/27/2013 1:40:00 PM

    Thank you friends! :)

  1. Date: 10/23/2013 11:19:00 PM

    This flows so effortlessly, a beautifully written masterpiece, Giorgio! What more can I say?...I am adding this to my favorites!...Thank you so much for giving my poem one of the first place spots in your contest! I appreciate it very much!

  1. Date: 10/23/2013 9:18:00 PM

    Beautiful and well thought out!

  1. Date: 10/23/2013 1:21:00 PM

    there is something quite mystical and dreamy about this introspective work... enjoyed the wave of lines rippling on my mind...enthralled am i.. :) huggs.. soup mail!..

  1. Date: 10/22/2013 10:08:00 AM

    This is beautiful and very relaxing to read. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla

  1. Date: 10/22/2013 9:44:00 AM

    This is an awesome write-- so whimsical and romantic-- a wonderful mixture of nature and love.

  1. Date: 10/22/2013 7:50:00 AM

    Awww..How romantic those two images amidst the fields..I really love the silken scarf imagery ..somehow gives the stanza a soft feeling.One of my favourite of yours so there it sails to my chest of favourites .Tnks for your visit to my poems : )

  1. Date: 10/22/2013 3:18:00 AM

    Excellent write! Much talent here.

  1. Date: 10/21/2013 10:32:00 PM

    I liked the rhyme and rhythm of the poem, Giorgio

  1. Date: 10/21/2013 7:40:00 PM

    Beautiful, bravo, LOVED IT, LOVED IT, COOL WRITE MY FRIEND. Cheri

  1. Date: 10/21/2013 7:15:00 PM

    very beautiful images in this poem. Love the repeating parts!!

  1. Date: 10/21/2013 6:36:00 PM

    a delightfully beautiful piece

  1. Date: 10/21/2013 5:46:00 PM

    This is amazing Giorgio. I love your style of writing. Very elegant. Hugs and love, Gail