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Below is the poem entitled EMPTY which was written by poet BL devnath. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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EMPTY

                                                        gold's not there
                                                       in the box of gold
                                                            empty box

                                                         love's not there 
                                                       in the loving heart
                                                           empty heart

                                                               no water
                                                        in the pond of fish
                                                              empty pond

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  1. Date: 10/21/2013 3:33:00 PM
    yes, very empty, BL. All things needed in our lives.

    devnath Avatar BL devnath
    Date: 10/21/2013 3:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Time to time effect, my lovely friend. Yes, all things are needed in life. Many thanks for your comment always. Loved always......,bl
  1. Date: 10/20/2013 9:09:00 PM
    Nice haiku of love and heart, Devnath

    devnath Avatar BL devnath
    Date: 10/21/2013 9:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Many thanks my friend Dr. Loved always, bl