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Giving In To The Gray

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Below is the poem entitled Giving In To The Gray which was written by poet Jesse James Forster. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Giving In To The Gray

Overwhelmed with fear I whispered into the rain
Disarming defenses, Giving in to the gray 
Tearing down all of my shelter within my hollowed decay
While this echoing silence gave every tear drop a name
They begin filling the voids with mundane hopes for a change
Heaven will save me from this hell and blue skies will reign
Lazily lay in green grass watching clouds drift away
It's all but a deflated dream now that the colors have changed
My thoughts have become restless noise of uncertainties rearranged
Damning all of my emotions, lies decorated with grace
Now I stand with a hardened heart in the sobering autumn rain 
I'm disarmed and defenseless, Giving in to the gray

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  1. Date: 10/20/2013 1:09:00 PM
    Absolutely stunning....

    Forster Avatar Jesse James Forster
    Date: 10/24/2013 3:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you very much , I really appreciate your time and thoughts. Thank you again...Jesse
  1. Date: 10/19/2013 8:42:00 PM
    great write Sir Jesse love your thoughts Shadow x smile

    Forster Avatar Jesse James Forster
    Date: 10/24/2013 3:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Shadow, you know its always my pleasure to see you stop by...Jesse