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  1. Date: 10/22/2013 5:27:00 PM
    I'm hearing what you say here. I have for some time had peripheral vision at times that show figures moving.. I try to turn an focus and they(them) disappear. I can see just enough to recognize they vary in age and time. Some may be children from generations ago while some may be contemporary and commonplace... I'm not crazy and they are not scary.... I don't know what to make of it.... Jake

  1. Date: 10/22/2013 4:37:00 PM
    nicely penned Gail..... true but scary

  1. Date: 10/21/2013 5:24:00 PM
    Beautiful all the ways causing horror at night. Beautiful expression. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 10/21/2013 1:04:00 PM
    - A really scary poem Gail .... - Imagination has really taken you    on scary adventures ... Love chilling and horror .... anything can happen on such a night ... - Proficient written, Gail!! - HAPPY HALLOWEEN !!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/21/2013 10:16:00 AM
    a truly enjoyable piece

  1. Date: 10/21/2013 9:48:00 AM
    yipers, gail... my bones chill and somehow delight in this raking piece... enjoyed the devilish feel of your theme..:) huggs

  1. Date: 10/20/2013 5:20:00 PM
    Ooh-hoo, me be scared. I hope "them" do not really exist. Nice rhythmic style you have going here, Gail. An entertaining poem, for sure. Licia :-)

  1. Date: 10/20/2013 8:41:00 AM
    Interesting take on this season of the year..Enjoyed reading this one today..I wanted to say thanks for the honor of placing in your contest..I enjoyed writing that work..Sara

  1. Date: 10/20/2013 6:37:00 AM
    Ooh .. spooky ..... haha.. nice poem .... xoxo~ Saanvi :)

  1. Date: 10/19/2013 11:24:00 PM
    kinda scary!! Toward the end especially. It reminds me of a student of mine that took a picture of this house he was thinking of buying. He had just looked inside it . It was empty. Went outside and took the picture of it. Went home and saw that in the window were the images of little kids looking very scared and a horrible looking demon type spirit standing behind them. It gave me the heebie jeebies when he showed me the photo!!

  1. Date: 10/19/2013 10:09:00 PM
    Scary but really good. Gave me the chills

  1. Date: 10/19/2013 8:21:00 PM
    YES!! Another harmonious poem about the damned in the afterlife! So supremely and masterfully portrayed are your thoughts within this awesome write! I really enjoyed reading this delightful piece this evening! What a tremendous poem, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 10/19/2013 6:17:00 PM
    Scary thoughts you have penned. Yes we do not want our soul stolen by the evil spirits that lie in another dimension. love phyl

  1. Date: 10/19/2013 6:00:00 PM
    Pretty scary Gail, yes we need to be cautious as to where the info is coming from I stay clear from Ouija boards, I don't trust them, well penned my friend, soon we'll be writing about Christmas, it's not that far away, love and hugs, always, Viexxxl

  1. Date: 10/19/2013 4:20:00 PM
    Excellent! Creepy, TRUE (depending on one's experience) and beautifully written- intense.

  1. Date: 10/19/2013 2:32:00 PM
    A brilliant poem, dear Gail! 7 out of 7 and saved as a fav :) Another excellent piece from you xo