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Night Owl

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Night Owl

Sitting by her open window,
Was a girl deep in thought,
Lost within a book of Poe,
A perfect poem she sought.

With a curious eye,
He watches her pen,
For she gives it a try,
Every now and then.

He will visit her forevermore,
In silent hours of midnight,
Casting his shadow on her floor,
Within the full moonlight.

Mysterious, nocturnal bird,
Calling out to darkened land,
Speaking such wise word,
Which I cannot understand.

I am lonely, I must confess,
It's just you, me and the moon,
You are much like me, I guess,
So, please sing me another tune.

A messenger of death,
Wailing songs of a banshee,
Has my grim reaper cometh,
Was this warning meant for me?

My soul was projected,
In the shadow of a fowl,
A raven I had expected,
Not the silhouette of an owl!


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  1. Date: 4/15/2014 7:02:00 PM

    seeing owls instead of ravens and yet making it sound very POE ish!!! what a clever poem. And thanks so much for the win. I'm happy you liked my poem.

  1. Date: 12/22/2013 8:28:00 PM

    Loved this one, being a big fan of Poe.. : ) Very nicely written. Always, Laura

    Deschler Avatar Kelly Deschler Date: 12/23/2013 10:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much, Laura, I am glad that you enjoyed this one! Poe is definitely my favorite poet, too. My poem titled, "Nevermore", is also a tribute to him.
  1. Date: 11/29/2013 6:40:00 AM

    I like the way you ended this intriguing poem in the last stanza.... Many thanks for sharing and big congrats on your win. Cheers

  1. Date: 11/27/2013 5:50:00 PM

    In the midnight hour it called my name, This desciple of death and doom. With wisdom's green eyes pierceing the night. A avanging angel did shy, peeling it's Feathers it exposed the truth, did the raven not lie within the owl. I hope you don't mind your poem inspired these lines cheri loved the above by the way.

  1. Date: 11/27/2013 3:04:00 PM

    Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/26/2013 5:33:00 PM

    My kind of rain Kelly , Congratulations !

  1. Date: 11/26/2013 4:35:00 PM

    Nice win Kelly, a very good poem.

  1. Date: 11/26/2013 4:31:00 PM

    Nice imagery. Congrats, Kelly!

  1. Date: 11/26/2013 9:52:00 AM

    well crafted piece...I like the Poe references...congrats on your win....

  1. Date: 11/26/2013 8:13:00 AM

    do you know that song, SAIL.. from AWOLNATION "".... the music is epic and lost in a deep spell...... the words in your Night Owl. poem fit perfectly. ....hugs. ..Linda

    Deschler Avatar Kelly Deschler Date: 11/26/2013 4:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes, I do know and love that song, "Sail" by AWOLNATION! And, I agree, my poem does fit perfectly with that song! :)
  1. Date: 11/26/2013 7:08:00 AM

    A deserving win. congrats!

  1. Date: 11/26/2013 6:45:00 AM

    Very strong, sentimental and lovely poem Kelly. A fave! Congrats on both, the verse and the great win. :) G.

    Deschler Avatar Kelly Deschler Date: 11/26/2013 4:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much for the fave, Giorgio! I am honored! :)
  1. Date: 11/26/2013 6:12:00 AM

    What a wonderful write, kelly. I love when you do the twist in the end.. congrats on the big win :)

  1. Date: 11/25/2013 11:39:00 PM

    Hi Kelly, wee.. This is one of my Faves... Glad it was in my contest..., Congratulations :-) for your nice win.... Thank you for considering my contest. Good Night ~ Linda ~

  1. Date: 11/15/2013 3:00:00 AM

    PS... and just so you know I read your amazing poem, awe... How you pushed the sounds and imagery like no one else. Deep, and kicks a$$..in a good way... Love the POE, thought... Darn, Owl. why did it ruin the moment and inspiration.... a #1 poem... Another Fave from you on my poetry list... A SUPER FAV.... xox..LINDA

  1. Date: 11/15/2013 2:56:00 AM

    Hello, Kelly I now just got my computer fix today... LOL, I got tired of creeping up on the soup from my phone. It' not the same when I'm trying to comment a poem:-)... I'm amazed our poem made the hot list in the first 2 hours it was up. That's awesome. Never did I think, it make it that far. Not cause it's us.. But, cause it was about Atlantis. haha :) Kelly, I am proud of all the comments... thank you very much... The Next One Is On You.... You decide the topic, and start the poem. xox~Linda

  1. Date: 10/28/2013 5:46:00 PM

    Excellent quatrains with marvelous word use and singular imagery. Very cleverly written with a twist in the tail! BRAVO Kelly!! Best wishes, Keith

  1. Date: 10/28/2013 4:54:00 PM

    Hi Kelly, Well done..Glad I stopped by to read this one.. Ken

  1. Date: 10/25/2013 2:38:00 PM

    Excellent poem! It's so rare to find poets devoted to the tradition of rhythm and rhymes§ Happy to enjoy your work! Love, Hanitra

  1. Date: 10/25/2013 2:24:00 PM

    Hi, Kelly ! - S-mail !!!! :)))

  1. Date: 10/25/2013 12:56:00 PM

    This is amazing Kelly! I love the reference to Poe, ending with the expectation of a raven... this is really great and was fun to read...

  1. Date: 10/24/2013 4:00:00 PM

    Really cool piece, Kelly. Had the feel of "The Raven" but you took it and made it your own. You transcended your inspiration. Loved every bit of this poem. Excellent job! <3

  1. Date: 10/24/2013 12:27:00 PM

    whooot!.. the ending really startled me, kel.. I felt your words in the pit of my belly, going from soft to racy... the detail throughout was wonderful, but the line" in the shadow of a fowl" line, " pulled me in...well done!!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 10/24/2013 4:13:00 AM

    beautifully crafted piece kelly

  1. Date: 10/23/2013 7:47:00 PM

    wow... we must think alike... Kelly, i have a beautiful poem... called "Poet In The Attic"... lol, not for poetry soup eyes... you have the same amazing idea and thoughts as i did.. But, don't worry you and I both nailed the poem in our own unique way... you are awesome ... this one is going straight to my favorite poems... hugs... LINDA.

    A  Avatar Poet Destroyer A Date: 10/23/2013 7:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    lol, my poem is not of a bird by the way... it's about a poet who sits in mystery... LOL... love ya...LINDA
  1. Date: 10/23/2013 7:16:00 AM

    - I'm by your side .... experience it with you in your wonderful poem Kelly! - Skillfully written - very well done! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/22/2013 5:01:00 PM

    So nice to be back reading your wonderful poems Kelly. Excellent poem this one.....Peter

  1. Date: 10/22/2013 8:50:00 AM

    An exquisite poem..I could see the picture in my mind while reading.

  1. Date: 10/22/2013 8:50:00 AM

    Stirring piece dear Kelly. As always you've composed wonderful art my friend. I will be catching up on your poems now as I finally got around to yours.

  1. Date: 10/22/2013 12:23:00 AM

    A fascinating combination of nocturnal sights n sounds with muse n poesy! Kudos! Take care poetess.

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