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ice inside my soul

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ice inside my soul

the ice inside my soul
is making me have a cold
it is getting me alone
and all over me whole
i dont know what i am
or what you think of me
but i know this for sure
is that i am a depressed teen
life is hard
being under the stars
not finding a loved one
and working very hard
with home work down our throats
and emotions down our cheek
and people wonder why 
it is hard being a teen
well let me explain
let me show you how i think
being me isnt easy 
living with in sadness
living in grief
and living with nothing to loose
and always disappointing family   
always getting average grades
and becoming friendly
but there is a time
and a teens life
were the world falls apart
and your just there
standing by the side
wondering why 
he is crying his heart out tonight
what you dont understand
is his emotions gone again
he lost his everything
gave up his all
and all in return
is trouble and sadness 
nothing greater
then a tear rolling down my chest
being a teen is harder then you think
cause all the emotions come with you
and hurt your heart deeply

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  1. Date: 10/18/2013 3:46:00 PM
    I liked the poem so much .. Is an attempt to celebrate this sadness that accompanies this period of age and provides the reader with a poetic language of simple but beautiful .. Regards